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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Repost: Gone Thoughts that are a dreamer's net. Cast into my days sunset. Held fast by my kismet. Of heart and brawn she was born. And baptized around the horn. She was of lusty spawn. Stood the oceans rage as few. And only she and I knew The many of her coup. Named and called the Honey Bee. Mistress of the mortal me Lost and downed, lost at sea. My mind rides before her mast Ever splicing waters past Until my bones are cast. Her heart was given to me Driven then, now shriven free. She's buried neath the sea. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful work... you are masterful, indeed! regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, You are a good friend. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is fantastic! Is it a true story? Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, what a lovely, old-world poem...you've brought the salt's spray to the blue, and for this, I thank you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, True thank you. *L* Sunshine, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Stood the oceans rage as few. And only she and I knew The many of her coup. Named and called the Honey Bee. Mistress of the mortal me Lost and downed, lost at sea. My mind rides before her mast Ever splicing waters past Until my bones are cast. (could that verse be any cooler)  Her heart was given to me Driven then, now shriven free. She's buried neath the sea. ======================================  Gone but not forgotten very cool poem Stinkie, love the triple rhyme lines. Now she sails the shorelines of your mind... and thats a very cool sea upon which to sail. *L* Me thinks you and Randy need to go deep sea diving for sunken treasure.. hows that for inspiration lol meSprayed across my heart and hers |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow Sy. Ever the way with words..I don't remember this one, so I'm glad I read it tonight... hugs,  K |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I felt sadness and just wanted to reach out and give you a hug. **big hugs** sweet man.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I did dive for treasure many years ago. Now I seek mental treasures, like butterflies. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Severn, Thank you for the WOW. *L* Startime, I'll take the hugs. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well, I could never deny you butterfly treasures  remember the wishes of the lamp ... how about another way to wish *L*  Sprayed across my heart and hers |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
"the many of her coup" So, only you and her knew the many of her coup, the good lord knew too. "Coup" as in falling in love? good poem good poem, good stuff good stuff Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sey, thank you for reposting this beauty and I truly enjoyed to read this fabulous write...absolutely stunning! ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Well since I can't rub you like a lamp, I'll take the butterfly wishes. LOL WW R S Eagle, Thank you for the good good. Charisma, Thank you for the beautiful comment. *L* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You've given me visions of a sailor this morn. One who sails the deepest part of a womans heart! A wonderful sea spray from your treasure box. Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, A wonderful reply, thank you. *L* |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very good. Very neat form. I enjoyed this. [This message has been edited by mirror man (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one I do!! Anything about the sea and ships! *of course being named after a Mississippi riverboat helps* ~hugs, Nancy Lee~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mirror Man, Thank you very much. Enchantress, Thank you Nancy Lee. |
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