Open Poetry #17 |
Don't Tread On Me....inspired |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Don't Tread On Me Sometimes treading where one has not been invited leads to more trouble than it's worth, when done. * a phrase...inspired. [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-06-2001).] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Don't know what inspired your post. But this was my reaction. Got the juices flowing. If footsteps stop, and the call for help is ignored, where will we be then? At times we tread softly, but onward, in the face of maybe danger, aware that two outcomes may prevail. Sincerely Rick |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice to see your response Rick...sometimes I wonder what causes a persons interest in anothers life when they were not interested enough to begin with before they see someone feeling down or up or in between. I was just saying that advice sometimes need not be given when not asked for unless like you say you are taking the chance of 1- being thanked for it or 2- being told to mind your own...anyway...thanks for reading. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Though people may not seem to care, when seeing someone unhappy, we all respond, be it to offer words of kindness or actions of help. We are all only human and many times do not know our own feelings till they are triggered. May you stay well and happy. Sincerely Rick |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
true regards, sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you again Rick and Sudhir..this has nothing to do with anyone on here...it is a statement of my perspective on life..sometimes ones words only add to the hurt..I understand the need to comfort..that is always accepted..it's the need to defend when there is nothing to defend..that is when no words need be said...You see I believe when one protests too much, there is a reason for it..but I would rather not get onto that subject ..my poem was a poem of expression only and not meant to be a discussion or I would have placed it there. I thank you both and any others for commenting, later on..I shall not be responding to this one anymore..it speaks for itself..... *s Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Gives lots of thought, Maureen. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maureen, it is so sad indeed where we are invited when we don't want to and it can break so many hearts when love should be where both want to be invited happily! (sigh) May your loving heart tread softly on joy and love ever after! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very true. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ *big grin* ... go with the gusto gal~ I like it~ Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You know Marge..*s gusto only goes so far around here...but I made my point I think and some may like it others may not..but I am not here to please anyone but myself...I do think you understand... hugss Maureen...I do believe the shadows hold the truth..and truth shall always win out "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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