Open Poetry #17 |
My MiniGuitar Man |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My MiniGuitar Man ~*Marge Tindal*~ You've scored a direct hit with an arrow of love to my heart Now ... and forever I want my words to impart a heart-felt 'I love you' from the very depths of me For you are all I dream of for now and through all of eternity~ I'm dancing with sheer joy at the music from your heart You've touched the dance in me with your love notes right from the start~ You are simply the hero of this beautiful book of everlasting love~ Until time moves through the end of me I'm gonna love you for foreverly~ *For the love of my life~ December 5, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Ah such a beautiful poem of the emotions of love. It is very powerful indeed. Very nicely done Marge! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Wonderful to have found the love of your life. Very nice. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just lovely Marge...lucky guy! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
VERY lucky guy |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very sweet and beautiful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Marge, the love of your life is going to swoon reading this! (smiles) May his loving heart forever bring sweet music to your ears, as your loving heart will skip into eternity! (sigh) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marge,there are no words to describe this beautiful poem.I love the illustrations you had in this poem. Juanita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hypnosis~ Welcome to Passions ! Thank you for the read and reply~ Joyce~ Yes ... each love is special and this one VERY special~ Enchantress~ WEll ... he's thinking you're right ... and I'm thinking I'm the lucky one~ Thank you, sweet lady~ InterLoper~ *Libra smiles* SodPossum~ Thank you very much~ Noah~ Yes, thank you~ NorthCarolinaGirl~ Thank you so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, it's wonderful that you are in love and wonder-full that you allow us to share vicariously. Good on ya, it's about time you got what you deserve! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Thank you so much ... Actually I've received so much more than I deserve ... but I'm keeping it anyhow ! ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Marge, I hope you tuck away all that extra love for a special night Loved this poem. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, Marge! Good for you! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Foreverly. This is good. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge Such a wonderful dedication to the special one you love. Your words were filled with love and romance and came straight from the kindest of hearts. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I thought we were gonna keep it quiet....but what the heck!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"I'm dancing with sheer joy at the music from your heart You've touched the dance in me with your love notes right from the start" --So sweet and touching, Marge. You're a wonderful romantic, I love that. Beautiful work! *Krista Knutson* |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Wow. I wish I could write of such undying love. Alas, I know it not. When I read this all I could think of was: I miss my ex, but my aim is improving. Looks like you hit the bullseye! ^_^ LadySofia |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dang Marge, Give me some of them happy pills, will ya? So happy for you, my dear! Cor |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
Wow! It is truly wonderful to see such true hearts... VR |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MisguidedAngel~ You're a doll ! Thank you for stopping in~ Denise~ Thank you, sweetie~ MirrorMan~ Thanks so very much~ SueTang~ I appreciate your sweet reply~ Balladeer~ WE were supposed to keep it quiet~ Now ONE OF WE had to blow the cover~ What EVER am I going to do with you~ You plucking my strings ??? Doing a darned good job of it I'd say ! ! Alwye~ Thank you. I'm incurably romantic and loving every minute of it~ LadySofia~ Yes, you could call it that~ It seems my target has been zeroed-in on~ Corinne~ Tee-Hee ! I'm 'overdosing' ... Thanks, gal~ VirgoRains~ Welcome to Passions ! Thank you so much for the read and reply~ *AND ... sharing with you all ... He not only plays guitar and writes music, he carves these lovely 'mini-guitars'~ I'm a very lucky lady to be loved so dearly~ Thank you all dear friends~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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