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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

0 posted 2001-12-05 02:28 PM

Her Flirting Eyes

by Michael

I caught her eye, she caught my own,
though she and I were not alone.
She had a friend, I had my wife.
So seems, the fortune of my life.

A come-one look, seductive stare.
I nearly fell out of my chair.
She had a drink and I had two.
What is a man supposed to do?

My wife got up, to bathroom went.
Her number, by a waiter, sent.
I thought I’d pass out then for sure.
Do roaming eyes not have a cure?

I could not help but want her lips,
as eyes traced down to lovely hips.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

1 posted 2001-12-05 02:30 PM

If you ever find a cure for wondering eyes,let me know.I have that same disease.Nice job!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-12-05 02:31 PM

Now, I know why he never takes me out to dinner!!!!!
It's that pause between courses that does it right? ROFL. Don't mind me, I really liked this poem.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-12-05 02:31 PM

Nice tracing

Well done!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-12-05 02:34 PM

hey Michael, I have the cure for those wandering eyes, it's called a left hook!!!
LOL

Very well done and fun sonnet

(((hugs)))

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-12-05 03:14 PM

Nice one Michael!
*still laughing at Sea's response.*
Hey it's okay to look!

~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-12-05 03:17 PM

Well you're a man. That explains it. Joyce

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-12-05 04:28 PM

Sometimes its better to look away...James

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-12-05 04:43 PM

A fine start, but I think it needs a bit more....go ahead, where else were your thoughts entertained...? There's a story here...

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

9 posted 2001-12-05 05:55 PM

I too have had those eyes, sometimes it gets annoying, but I cant hepl but wonder about my interests

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-12-05 06:07 PM

Michael the reponses to this are pretty funny, I too think you should do a part two..
Sandra

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

11 posted 2001-12-05 06:41 PM

When what to my wandering eyes
should appear,
but a miniature left hook,
right next to my poor ear!

I couldn't resist! Blame it on SEA's reply.

OK, Michael, just what did you do with that phone number? Passed it on to a bachelor friend maybe?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

12 posted 2001-12-05 06:44 PM

mmmm not too sure how to respond...*grin* your sure wrote it well but I have to smile at the left hook...*giggling*

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

13 posted 2001-12-05 07:41 PM

Michael,

What a fun write. I love to see you like this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

14 posted 2001-12-06 06:51 AM

Hope you dodge well here my friend! LOL! At least you know you're alive in the world! And not blind that's a good thing

Be well.
Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

15 posted 2001-12-06 04:58 PM

sodpossom,
I'm not looking for a cure.

LOL! Thanks

Irish Rose,
Actually, she was my dessert.

(kidding) LOL! Thank you!

Interloper,
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Susan,
Ouch! Hey, I'm subtle at it. Well, not TOO subtle.

LOL! Thank you, sweetie. (((hugs)))

Nancy,
Looking is fine. Touching is trouble.

LOL! Thank you and *hugs* back!

Joyce,
Hey, now! Be nice!

LOL! Thank you for reading.

James,
Yeah, looking is fun.

Sometimes the fantasy is a whole lot better than the reality. Thanks

Karilea,
Where else were my thoughts entertained? The answer to THAT would have to be posted in Adult. LOL!

In order to continue the story I'd have to call the number she gave me. Uh uh, no way I'm doing that. LOL! Thanks for liking this one.

Randy,
Thanks for stopping by and a BIG welcome to Passions.

Sandra,
Am NOT calling that woman's number! Part two might get me divorced. LOL!

Thanks, my friend (((hugs)))

Kacy,
No, actually, I threw it away. Honestly...scout's honor! Convinced yet? LOL!

Thanks!

Startime,
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Tara,
Thanks, what a sweet thing to say.

(((hugs)))

Regina,
Pretty good at dodging.

And NO, am NOT blind. LOL!

Thanks! (((hugs)))

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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