»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #17
»
Shadow Dance
| Open Poetry #17 |
|
Shadow Dance |
|
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
|
 ~*Marge Tindal*~ Every shadow cast of light sometimes dim - sometimes bright Everything the bright light sees dances from the shadows of me Once in a moment of deep despair the shadow moved and I was there shining brightly on my own I glanced around and shadow was gone Standing on my own I see shadows dance on walls of me No longer do I fear the gaze of shadows dancing in my haze Light of light in shadow free Steps lightly 'round reflections of me ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"shadows dance on walls of me" Marge, I love that line! Excellence from your pen as always!!  |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) All the lovely reflections of you dance in your heart, and you share them all in your beautiful words so gorgeously! (sigh) All these reflections of your loving spirit will always cast shadows on the walls of your heart! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marge,you have cast a whole new light on shadows.     Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).] |
||
|
sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Marge Very beautiful rhyme and flow.Enjoyed it! |
||
|
Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge... This is wonderful stuff, as always . I love the images you create. Thank you for sending me this.Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! I absolutely love it. You have given such a unique vision with this poem. BRAVO!!  **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, perhaps you need to call Deer to shadow dance with you. I'll bet his shadow could do a great tango. But then you would be a shadow of your former self  Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
||
|
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, you have such a way with words. I just love to read your poems. |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thanks, gal~ I am so glad you enjoyed it~ Noah~ Thank you~ NorthCarolinaGirl~ Awwww, thanks~ SodPossum~ I thank you for noticing the rhythm ... Seems fitting for a dance of shadows to have some rhythm, eh ? Bec~ Thank you, sweetie~ Kind of thought you'd enjoy it~ StarTime~ Thank you for your devoted reads and replies~ Sending a *HUG* Kethry~ Okay~ Tee-Hee ... actually we've done a lot of shadow BOXING ... what's a dance between friends~ SmartChick~ Oh ... this poetess thanks you very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Interesting read Marge ... It pulls me in more than one direction but I like that in a poem |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Standing on my own I see shadows dance on walls of me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this Marge! You've shed a whole new light on the subject! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
||
|
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Shadow dance...indeed.. Truly beautiful and so eloquently said... I loved it..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
