Open Poetry #17 |
Please Forgive Me |
N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
The music plays softly as the man drops to his knees. Oh,honey plese forgive me to his wife he pleas. I never meant to do any harm. He begs please forgive me as he grabs her arm. I never knew it would turn out like this. Please forgive me and give me a kiss. I won`t do it again he said in a quiet voice. It was all my fault I made the wrong choice. I didn`t know whether to wash or dry clean. I`m so sorry your new pink blouse has turned green. Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This poet is going to enjoy your sense of humor! Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
hehhee, was he forgiven? Welcome to Passions! This was so creative! Looking forward to more from you! Please check your email for a special greeting! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sudhir,thanks for the smiles- Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sunshine,thanks for reading I appreciate it. Rose Petal,I really appreciate the warm welcome. Juanita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Oh Juanita, this is so cute and funny, your beautiful words make me smile! (big hugggssssss) We already love you so very much, sweet friend! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, sweet Juanita, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait to read more of your beautiful words, sweet friend! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NorthCarolinaGirl~ Firstly ... WELCOME to Passions~ Nextly ... *grinning* here big time ! My used-to-be swore he wore pink underwear for the first year of our laundering together~ Tee-Hee ... a mild exageration, I'm SURE~ Welcome to the circle of friends and poets~ You'll enjoy the poetry here and the friendship is beyond compare ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very funny!I like you,you make me laugh! |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Very cute. *LAUGH* I enjoyed this. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,thanks for the hugs and love.I already know I`m going to like it here. Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
eeewwwwwww Very cute, NCG I enjoyed immensely |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marge,I have already found that there are some wonderful people here.Marsha,& Kethry highly recommended this site.Thanks again! Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,I think this site is going to be fun! Love,mama Juanita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alright this is similar to the time my ex wife washed the brand new red shirt mixed in with my white tee shirt and underwear and everything came out pink...we got divorced for other reasons...I think...James |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Abigaile,thanks for reading and I`m glad you liked it. Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Nan,thanks I`m glad you liked it! Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
James,believe me my husband has had some pink underwear before. Juanita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. I can never get too much of this kind of humor! Great post. Nice to meet you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic First Post! I'll be looking forward to seeing more from you! ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Minitesun,its nice to meet you too. Thanks for reading! Juanita |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I enjoyed your little joke. He actually washed clothes? I'd forgive him anything. Joyce |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Entrantress,thanks for the lovely welcome. Juanita |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Joyce,I would probaly fall out if my husband washed any clothes. Juanita |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Heeheehee what a cute first post Welcome indeed!! yeah, I won't let my hubby near the washing machine, I think he planned it that way |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Interloper,thank you I appreciate it! Juanita |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Juanita, you have me laughing so much I need to be hung out to dry. Welcome Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juanita darling girl oh great you made it here. As always this is perfect, a really fabulous write to introduce yourself here. Ssssshhhhhhhh do you think they'll know you and I are friends? mmmmmm I expect so in that case I won't try to hide the welcome As always darling girl you fill the air with joi d'vivre. I'm so happy you came, and you'll love the smilies here darling girl, you know I do. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
NCG... Love it! Very cute. I must admit though, my boyfriend has never changed the colour of any of my clothes, although I did it once! *lol* Wlecome to Passions. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Juanita, This is cute! I love it. I see you have a handle on all the smileys here, too. Nan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Enjoyed this a lot, good twist to what it seemed like at first. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* Oh I can see I am going to really enjoy reading your poems. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Hi Juanita...... I absolutely LOVED this one..... It is PURE JUANITA.... Thanks so much for telling me about this site. Lyra |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well well am I glad to see your lovely humor here. Welcome NCG I'm a fan already Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Titia,I`m so glad you liked this. Nan,hey friend its good to be back together again.;loveya: Kethry,I just couldn`t resist this site,thanks friend Sea,thanks for reading this. Marsha,my friend you are something else you knew I would like this place. Bec,thanks for checking my poem out Catlinamoon,thank you! Irish Rose,thank you so much! Startime,thanks for the welcome! Lyra,I`m glad to see you here! Juanita |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
AN ABSOLUTE MASTERPEICE.... KEEP THAT PEN IN HAND !!! TIMOTHYS ANGEL Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
lol..too cute! welcome to passions hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Timothys Angel,thank you for the nice words. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
dvgarnar,thanks for the welcome Juanita |
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