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N orth Carolina Girl
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0 posted 2001-12-05 11:27 AM


The music plays softly as the man drops to his knees.
Oh,honey plese forgive me to his wife he pleas.

I never meant to do any harm.
He begs please forgive me as he grabs her arm.

I never knew it would turn out like this.
Please forgive me and give me a kiss.

I won`t do it again he said in a quiet voice.
It was all my fault I made the wrong choice.

I didn`t know whether to wash or dry clean.
I`m so sorry your new pink blouse has turned green.

        




Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Juanita - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-12-05 11:30 AM


    

regards,
sudhir

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-12-05 11:34 AM



This poet is going to enjoy your sense of humor!  Welcome to Passions!  Please check your e-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-12-05 11:36 AM


hehhee, was he forgiven? Welcome to Passions! This was so creative! Looking forward to more from you! Please check your email for a special greeting!
N orth Carolina Girl
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4 posted 2001-12-05 12:16 PM


Sudhir,thanks for the smiles-

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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5 posted 2001-12-05 12:37 PM


Sunshine,thanks for reading I appreciate it.  
Rose Petal,I really appreciate the warm welcome.  


              
                        
                

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2001-12-05 12:48 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Juanita, this is so cute and funny, your beautiful words make me smile! (big hugggssssss) We already love you so very much, sweet friend! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, sweet Juanita, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait to read more of your beautiful words, sweet friend! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-12-05 12:54 PM


NorthCarolinaGirl~
Firstly ... WELCOME to Passions~

Nextly ... *grinning* here big time !
My used-to-be swore he wore pink underwear for the first year of our laundering together~
Tee-Hee ... a mild exageration, I'm SURE~

Welcome to the circle of friends and poets~
You'll enjoy the poetry here and the friendship is beyond compare !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

sodpossom
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8 posted 2001-12-05 01:39 PM


Very funny!I like you,you make me laugh!
Abigaile
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9 posted 2001-12-05 01:44 PM


Very cute. *LAUGH* I enjoyed this.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

N orth Carolina Girl
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10 posted 2001-12-05 01:49 PM


Noah,thanks for the hugs and love.I already know I`m going to like it here.

                              

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).]

Nan
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11 posted 2001-12-05 01:50 PM


eeewwwwwww
Very cute, NCG
I enjoyed immensely

N orth Carolina Girl
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12 posted 2001-12-05 01:55 PM


Marge,I have already found that there are some wonderful people here.Marsha,& Kethry highly recommended this site.Thanks again!
                    


                

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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13 posted 2001-12-05 02:00 PM


Stevie,I think this site is going to be fun!
          

Love,mama

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2001-12-05 02:07 PM


Alright this is similar to the time my ex wife washed the brand new red shirt mixed in with my white tee shirt and underwear and everything came out pink...we got divorced for other reasons...I think...James
N orth Carolina Girl
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15 posted 2001-12-05 02:30 PM


Abigaile,thanks for reading and I`m glad you liked it.


Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).]

N orth Carolina Girl
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16 posted 2001-12-05 02:40 PM


Nan,thanks I`m glad you liked it!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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17 posted 2001-12-05 02:45 PM


James,believe me my husband has had some pink underwear before.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Midnitesun
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18 posted 2001-12-05 03:03 PM


     

Welcome. I can never get too much of this kind of humor!  Great post. Nice to meet you.

Enchantress
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19 posted 2001-12-05 03:11 PM



Fantastic First Post!
I'll be looking forward to seeing more from you!
   ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

N orth Carolina Girl
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20 posted 2001-12-05 03:16 PM


Minitesun,its nice to meet you too.
Thanks for reading!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Joyce Johnson
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21 posted 2001-12-05 03:20 PM


I enjoyed your little joke.  He actually washed clothes?  I'd forgive him anything.  Joyce
N orth Carolina Girl
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22 posted 2001-12-05 03:32 PM


Entrantress,thanks for the lovely welcome.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Interloper
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23 posted 2001-12-05 03:40 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

N orth Carolina Girl
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24 posted 2001-12-05 03:47 PM


Joyce,I would probaly fall out if my husband washed any clothes.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

SEA
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25 posted 2001-12-05 03:54 PM


Heeheehee   what a cute first post   Welcome indeed!!   yeah, I won't let my hubby near the washing machine, I think he planned it that way  
N orth Carolina Girl
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26 posted 2001-12-05 04:02 PM


Interloper,thank you I appreciate it!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Kethry
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27 posted 2001-12-05 05:33 PM


Juanita,
you have me laughing so much I need to be hung out to dry. Welcome
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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28 posted 2001-12-05 05:35 PM


Juanita darling girl oh great you made it here. As always this is perfect, a really fabulous write to introduce yourself here. Ssssshhhhhhhh do you think they'll know you and I are friends? mmmmmm I expect so in that case  
I won't try to hide the welcome


WELCOME TO PASSIONS


As always darling girl you fill the air with joi d'vivre.

I'm so   happy you came, and you'll love the smilies here darling girl, you know I do.

    
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
    



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Bec
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29 posted 2001-12-05 05:52 PM


NCG... Love it! Very cute. I must admit though, my boyfriend has never changed the colour of any of my clothes, although I did it once! *lol* Wlecome to Passions.

Bec  

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-Winnie-the-Pooh

Pilgrimage
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30 posted 2001-12-05 06:00 PM


Dear Juanita,
This is cute! I love it. I see you have a handle on all the smileys here, too.

Nan

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31 posted 2001-12-05 06:33 PM


Enjoyed this a lot, good twist to what it seemed like at first.
Sandra

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32 posted 2001-12-05 06:41 PM


Welcome!!!!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Startime
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33 posted 2001-12-05 06:47 PM


*giggling* Oh I can see I am going to really enjoy reading your poems.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
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34 posted 2001-12-05 06:53 PM


Hi Juanita......
I absolutely LOVED this one.....
It is PURE JUANITA....
Thanks so much for telling me about this site.

Lyra  


Titia Geertman
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35 posted 2001-12-05 07:33 PM


Well well am I glad to see your lovely humor here.
Welcome NCG I'm a fan already  

Titia

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Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace

N orth Carolina Girl
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36 posted 2001-12-05 09:44 PM


Titia,I`m so glad you liked this.
Nan,hey friend its good to be back together again.;loveya:
Kethry,I just couldn`t resist this site,thanks friend
Sea,thanks for reading this.
Marsha,my friend you are something else you knew I would like this place.
Bec,thanks for checking my poem out
Catlinamoon,thank you!
Irish Rose,thank you so much!
Startime,thanks for the welcome!
Lyra,I`m glad to see you here!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

timothysangel1973
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37 posted 2001-12-09 02:12 AM


AN ABSOLUTE MASTERPEICE....

KEEP THAT PEN IN HAND !!!

TIMOTHYS ANGEL

Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something.  ~Pancho Villa

dgvarner
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38 posted 2001-12-09 02:39 AM


lol..too cute!

welcome to passions  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

N orth Carolina Girl
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39 posted 2001-12-09 07:07 PM


Timothys Angel,thank you for the nice words.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

N orth Carolina Girl
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40 posted 2001-12-09 07:08 PM


dvgarnar,thanks for the welcome

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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