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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-04 08:28 PM


When Snow Angels Kiss
By: Noah Eaton & RosePetal
12/4/01

Side by side we lean on each other in a cozy sleigh
Listening to the sweet jingle bells of our chariot ride play
I hear you sigh happily, breathing softly on your cheek
Feeling the snowflakes kiss your flesh like angels as you sleep
These halcyon holidays chant merrily as I hear your lips sing
Of silent nights and Christmas days crowned in halos and rings
Gently I kiss your lips, adorning your hair with a juniper sprig
You wear the tiara of winter so perfectly, like Noel and her angels did
Your smile is so radiant like the glitter on a silver birch tree
Gently as I kiss your lips, I can hear the winter angels singing

Sharing this day of holiday cheer
Counting down the days 'til christmas is here
Heavenly peace surrounds me when I'm in your arms
My spirits are high, my soul is calm
Together in the chilly weather, we build a snowman
We giggle since frosty is lopsided
I did the best I can!
A snowball fight, you toss one at me
My laughter echoes like jingle bells in harmony
I stare at you in your winter jacket and boots
Even when bundled up, you look so cute
Our love is swirling in the air
like a mist of perfume
The winter tiara sparkles in my hair
Your lips warm me like mid-june
Finally, out of the pure white snow
We snuggle on the sofa sharing hot cocoa
Soon Santa Claus will be on his way
Atop our roof with his reindeer and sleigh
Through the window we watch the whirling wind
I hold you tighter, envisioning the new year
2002 is about to begin

And the church-bells echo
Softly in the cashmere windrow
Together we will ride this tunnel of love
In this sleigh ride with you to romantic worlds we’ve never dreamed of
As I wrap this downy blanket over you in the sapphire moonlight
Holding you this Christmas, feeling your heart whisper to mine
And we’ll rest together in ecstacy, as we lay by the fire hearing the chestnuts popping
Making love to you, as we gaze upon the star atop our Christmas tree
Watching it glisten, like the true love you have given me…
A love so heavenly…
A love so true…
For you and me...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-04-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-04 08:34 PM


Very sweet and romantic, what a delight of a visual I might add! Congrats, Sweet Noah!
Enjoyed.

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2 posted 2001-12-04 08:56 PM


This poem is just beautiful. Great cooperation.
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3 posted 2001-12-04 08:58 PM


This is very bautiful, and speaks of the fantasy I often had, to have the right person and ride in  sleigh, walk in the snow, and make it fun, instead of just TOO COLD.
Love this, you did good for #1000!
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-12-05 07:58 PM


Very beautiful, you two! Breathtaking!
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5 posted 2001-12-05 08:00 PM


BRAVO!!!! A wonderful duet for your 2000th post...Very well done, Noah and RosePetal.   You two write very very well together.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-12-05 08:06 PM


What a beutiful poem you two have created! I loved each and every part.  The collaboration was excellent (big hugs) You did a great job.  I can see the love in the air in this great part of the year, and it cant get much better.  Nice job Noah and Rosepetal.  (hugs again for the both of ya)

      From your good friend
         Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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7 posted 2001-12-05 08:07 PM


Lordy, child, didn't you just have your 1000 poem?  My goodness, take a manicure!
Rest those fingers or you will have carpel tunnel like me  
i love this by the way

Kathleen (Kay)
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8 posted 2001-12-05 08:13 PM


Noah and Joanna...this is beautiful!
You two write very well together!
Congratulations on your 2000th post!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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9 posted 2001-12-05 08:40 PM


Hi everybody!! Just wanted to express a very big thank you to you all for stopping in and reading our collaboration! We love you all! And to Noah, a big thank you for wanting to write a poem with me, it was so much fun and we must do it again for my 1,000th post which is coming up shortly!
((hugs)) xoxox

RosePetal

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-05-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-12-05 08:42 PM


Such a brilliant 2000th post you have afforded us Noah.  I thought it was absolutely stunning, filled with so much love and romance and written from the kindest of hearts.  Thank you for giving me an insight into a snow filled Christmas.  Think of me this Christmas as it will probably be 35 degrees celcius and stinking hot here on Christmas Day in Summer in Melbourne, Australia!! :-) Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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11 posted 2001-12-05 08:42 PM


Beautiful,sweet and romantic!
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