Open Poetry #17 |
Just now |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
quiet evening drops of rain against window nature's music heard reflection of flames dancing shadows on the wall woodstove burning warm not another sound even the birds stopped singing all listening to the rain A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I hear this rainsong it ticks against my windows whispers of the rain Beautifully done Titia ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love the sound of the rain Titia, and you tell of it well (even the birds are quiet)! Nicely done. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Titia, these are sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) This sparrow happily twitters hearing the rain sigh in your lovely words! (sigh) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always so beautiful to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Southern winds blowing Spring comes to December plains Who knows what follows... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm waiting for rain also, Titia, right now everything seems so very far away, even the rain. Everything in this poem touched me. We're having what they call "Indian summer" here in Indianapolis and it's calm. A good time of the year for change, I suppose. So glad to see you and read your thoughts tonight.... Kathleen (Kay) |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Ah, the beautiful silence of rain! Simple and sweet. ^_^ LadySofia |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your words create a wonderful and calming mood, Titia |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks friends, it just came up sitting here. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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