Open Poetry #17 |
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Thank You (a tanka) |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA ![]() |
Thank You I cannot express The love that grows in my heart Strong every day. I thank you from the bottom Of my heart for loving me. For my Dave, who I love more than I thought possible. Thank you ![]() "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you are so cute ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful...and you've not even begun to think yet! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh Tara, you are just so sweet, we all love you so very much! (kisses on cheeks) Muah! (smiles) Thank you for being such a special and loving friend to me always, I love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think you have only just begun to express it...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful expression of love lady poetess. Wonderful write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
THANK YOU..for always sharing you beautiful creations with us. Very sweet tanka Love, RosePetal |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
as always, i am in awe, my dear. ~bows dramatically, overtly decides that's not good enough, and throws himself at your feet and bangs his forehead on the floor~ !! ow. and i love you too ![]() -Dave |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a sweet and romantic thank you. I love it and I can see he loves it too. You two are such a joy to see. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
rosepetals- What a lovely and tender expression of your love and gratitude. Beautifully done. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
aint love grand... ![]() hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
i quite enjoyed this i've not yet written tanka until this moment in commenting on your poem is "strong" meant to be "stronger" WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments. [This message has been edited by wornways (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank youi all for your replies ![]() ![]() wornways - Welcome to the land of Tankas ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it ![]() |
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