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Thinking In We
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Thinking In We |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Thinking In We ~*Marge Tindal*~ What a tiny little word that encompasses such promise Me, You ... becoming we Just how wonderful is that thought ? ~You join..........with me in swirls............of love turning...turning...turning in full-circle.......of we~ ~All is complete within the circle of we Simply sweet perfection of blending of our melt-of-love The we of us-enough to take our breaths away -sharing with one another on this very special day~ Each and every time you come to me in gentle rhyme I fall apart at the seams with the joy of loving that you bring into the circle of we~ So I am compelled to think in beautiful hues of we colored ink~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Nice. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, this is utterly utterly fabulous. Truly wonderful, I love it when your heart shines like this.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
AWESOME! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Little Goose, your talents are outstanding in all fields, for you share the "we" with so many, and I know that the you is a fool if not to become we...very gentle smile |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderful.... a lovely tribute to this circle of we.....  thank you dearest Marge ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MirrorMan~ Thank you~ Nice to see you~ MarshaLove~ Sweet, sweet friend ... I'm so full of this *Big Love* ... they're thinking of calling ME, Mushy~  InterLoper~ You please me with your one-worder~ It's all I need know~ Thank you~ Logan~ You just know this *LittleGoose* inside-out~  *smiling* ...  MyEnchantedMelody~ Ahhhh, it is a circle that holds me centered in love~ Thank you sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
and in this circle of rhyme all the passions meet the me, the you, the we cause your in centre Margie sweet Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
YOU are such a BEAUTIFUL warmhearted lady...Thank you for your always warm and uplifting poems, they always brighten my days. (((hugs))) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I just love the happy in your we! Big hugs! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is a delightful read... from the title through the last word - inviting the reader onto a dizzying carousel where the melody playing is hope and happiness is leaping about and playing peek-a-boo through the painted ponies. *G* Beautifully written, dear lady... may joy be your continued inspiration! *S* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you SHOW what you feel, my friend Thanks, sudhir |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marge,this was great!    Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Isn't it just the most romantic and heavenly feeling when you feel the heart of true love beat against yours? (sigh) Oh Marge, you are sooooooo romantic, this beautiful poem had me sighing to envision two hearts melting together as one! (sigh) Soooooooo gorgeous, I love your timeless words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Amazingly beautiful! *SMILE* I love the imagery and emotions you put through in this. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ You are such a joy to this poet's heart~ Charisma~ I love to share a moment of brightness with you~ Martie~ Thanks, sweet Sis~ You know I'm so happy being we~ SuthernGal~ Awwww, how beautifully poetic is your reply~ Thank you dearest friend~ Sudhir~ Ahhhhhh ... and I also feel what I show~ *Hugs* to you~ NorthCarolinaGirl~ Thank you very much~ Noah~ Thanks bunches~ Abigaile~ Awwww, I appreciate that~ By the way ... your name is beautiful~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Beautifully woven, Marge, such a delight to read. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
such a beautiful WE~ave you have woven with your words Margie! As always sweet poetess, your words are lovely! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MisguidedAngel~ You're just a doll ! Thank you~ GentleSpirit~ Thanks so much ... He weaves the magic around the we of us~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An absolutely delicious poem, Marge the feeling of "we" is such a secure feeling that it is almost impossible to describe.... but you have done it...... and you have done a wonderful job too!  Lyra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just wonderful, Marge. Thank you for sharing it. |
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