Open Poetry #17 |
Lohn John, the Braggart!!! |
Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That Long John's such a bag of wind! He always likes to brag. He practices one-upmanship So much it makes me gag! No matter what one may have done Lohn John has done one better. He'll tell you that his family Is perfect to the letter! While we were having lunch last week He looked me in the eye And told me that his grandpa knew The date that he would die! Not only did he know the year... He knew the month and day And when that day came 'round at last The old man passed away!!! "Oh, come on, John!" I groaned aloud "You know that it's a lie! It is not possible to know The day you're gonna die!" But Long John swore it was the truth He wouldn't change a word. I simply laughed and said that he Was totally absurd! "Ok", I said, "then tell me how He knew when he'd be dead!" "That's easy", he smiled back at me. "Judge told him", Long John said!!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not only did LJA get away with this one, you LET him! Good chuckles.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Very clever, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Balladeer, this is very good with a clever, comical ending! Love the graphic! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ah...loving the joust again....seems like old times! very very funny, and remind me not to joust with you, eh? chuckle |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with delight* Oh gosh this is a good one. I wonder who will get the last laugh. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... oh, you are soooo good to my funnybone! Thanks for the smiles Michael, this was terrific! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer dear heart, you tell a joke better than anyone I know. I love this one I really do, as always superb writing. And you know how much I love to laugh and giggle. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that's my 'Deer kickin at the kitty kicker LOL very fun poem |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Good one, Balladeer! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Mr. Balladeer, you are so good. I love to read your poems. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh my goodness - I cannot believe anybody would think this was wonderful. I cannot believe it. Look at how you have besmirched my family name! Look at how you have thrown down the gauntlet. Just look at that! My goodness. You're gonna get it for this! My kitty kicking days are on hold now, you scalawag. My goodness! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You don't know how I've missed the shenanigans... or how welcome a read this is! *S* Go git 'im, Deer! *G* |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Iz that why you say LJA is infamous? |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very clever and humorous! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Seems the gauntlet's been thrown down said one to another, clown to clown, "I'll get you, I will" John said to 'Deer while we sit, agog, to clap, and cheer... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Joust perfect, if I'm any judge. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Balladeer, Poor Long John. Probably hates it when the truth leaks out! What a pity. ROTFLMAO |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Very interesting, and different. I enjoyed the slight humor and lightness. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Balladeer,oh.oh so funny I loved this Juanita |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... OK - So THIS explains that scalawag & his sordid past... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Y'all are cracking me up way down here in SC. I love reading these Balladeer and Long John poems, looks like another long nite.... As I am only 1/4 of the way through with what I set out to do. Big Hugs to you Balladeer...made me giggle! ~timothysangel Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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