Open Poetry #17 |
Candle |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Brief, brief candle! It was out I supposed. But after the incense faded, I still saw the candle- standing...with a little light on. That light proved my love- not only toward the scent but also to the beauty I've found when I sliced it in half. ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow....Lizzy, I love this...you are a very talented poetess |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Your candle of your heart will forever glow with love and hope as your smile brightens! (sigh) Your words are soooooo beautiful, I love them all! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lizzy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Lizzy! Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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