Open Poetry #17 |
The Salad Girl |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I first met her and her rhyme when she was in three-quarter time a bit of salad was all she asked not too much hardly a task actually I’d seen her writings before but her poetry swept me out the dor I sat me back, a bit chagrined wondered if I’d be invited in to see the style which she swept around or for shadows was I bound? But what I have seen is a lady by write who has it in her to see through her fights of right and wrong the ups and downs and silver linings wing her frowns to a place she’d rather be, eating salad while reading poetry so I leave it now to you, and you, to see her in the light I do, and know that she will simonize again but you never know where, and you never know when! /pip/Forum4/HTML/002000.html [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-13-2001).] |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
what a gem you've written about a gem I had yet to read, thanks for the pointing |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awwww.... *blush* you're so sweet! THANK you, Karilea.... for this treasured poem and your very special friendship.... i'm honored |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Really nicely done ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW. Your poem is awesome, and the link to Doreen's Salad? Hungry for a repeat. Can we get her to re-post it here? PLEASE? I absolutely love it! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You two make a good team, I must say. Poetry begets poetry, and it's all yummy. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sunshine, Super job! Loved it and the link. Excellent response. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're absolutely write... She's got quite a phenomenal mind - And you give her fine tribute...indeed... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Oh I think she's alright no fuss or anything hehe yuh yuh!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
how perfect. I love the way they both go together. LOL you did a wonderful job and have both given me smiles with your salad poems. And you are right she is wonderful isn't she. But don't forget how incredibly special you are too. **hugs**BRAVO!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea- Wonderful! Such a perfect tribute to a well-deserving poet and friend. VERY nicely done. Hugs to you both ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--What a fitting tribute...I knew it was doreen before looking at the link. Great poem from a special lady to a special lady! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gotta ditto Martie, had to be about Doreen, who else? What a great job you did on this one my friend, but then you always do a great job! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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