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Be Not A Stranger To Love (Marge's Challenge)
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Be Not A Stranger To Love (Marge's Challenge) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Be Not A Stranger To Love early as I sit at writers desk another morning from lack of rest gazing out, a sea of fog rest low on fields this sight explaining my emotions so real hidden from me is a once familiar place but as I look can not recognize one trace a raven flies on ebony silken wings I strain to hear him but only silence sings all the things this field is void of is the echo…be not a stranger to love for love can melt thick fog so deep replacing uncertainty with something to keep opening our arms they become wings before our eyes and in another’s hand, again we learn to fly steps in love and fog can be a risk this stranger is tired of walking through the mist "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Slick, Your answers in your poem. Enjoyed |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~all the things this field is void of is the echo…be not a stranger to love for love can melt thick fog so deep replacing uncertainty with something to keep~ Beautifully done! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is excellent! I like this very much. beautifully worded  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Beautifully written.You've answered your own question with your own words. Peaches |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ This is one slick piece of inspire~ Beautiful .... just beautiful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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