Open Poetry #17 |
If Only Love |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If Only Love If only love was as simple as a kiss. I can do that well. My lips touching hers in silky tenderness. If only love were as simple as a hug. I'm good at that. Why can't that be love? If only love was as simple as a touch. I certainly wish that was love because I can never be touched enough. If only love was as simple as a smile. I'd smile for you and I'd love you too until all your dreams come true. If only love was a simple act of caring then I would already be in love with you and this would be love that we are sharing. JamesLee December03 2001 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A good reflective love poem, James. Love is never simple, is it? It's never been simple for me anyway, except in a general sense. One-to-one romantic love is probably the hardest thing on earth to explain, the whys and wherefores seem to vary with each couple. And to actually have and hold onto? I hope that you will be one of the lucky ones. If only I had a better reply. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
James, Beautiful write as always.My love is simple like this.Just a samll touch or a smile mean the world to me.Only if it could be like this for all. Peaches |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) If only love could be so free and never so complicated! (sigh) Your loving heart always floods with pure love, and very soon you will indeed give the love of your life all that her heart desires and she will fall in love with you forever! (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Nah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Well put them all together and your close. LOL Enjoyed |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
says it all, says a ton! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* oh how I like this one, Simple Beautiful!!!! thread to my library ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Ocean Beauty Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 18VT, USA |
I really wish love WAS that simple, but it never is, is it? Lovely poem, I liked it alot. ~Dawn~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you know what I think, James. I think it is as simple as all these things but we have to go and make it complicated. Beautiful writing. **Hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this one James...and I wish love were that simple. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love should be that simple, lovely poem. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. Love is very complicated, sometimes. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If only love were as simple as a hug. I'm good at that. Why can't that be love? If only love was as simple as a touch. I certainly wish that was love because I can never be touched enough. ==================================== SBJ ... the longing in this reflective write touches me....its does seem like it should just be that simple...I guess human nature is too complex in matters of the heart. you ask all the right questions in this clever poetic pondering. I love the anologies you made here. Well done poet sweetbabyJames he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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