Open Poetry #17 |
A blue serenade |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I will not surrender or give up on love completely, for this has been a long private journey, our place in time where we have traveled far. Past the point of no return of what lies ahead and beyond, and what may never be. So long past the spur of the moment where there is no beginning to the end, nor is there a course to steer us in the right direction. For even if there were, I know not the path I'd take. It is in the here and now and forever and always beneath the falls of sweet surrender. A place I've swam to and away from, and no longer wish to dwell upon. Leaving to pool in the past behind me. Out of sight and presumably out of mind but always by your side, if you want me to be. If there should ever come a day when our hearts are set free, it is then I will surrender, and love you completely. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice sentiments...friendship sometimes holds the best until it can become deeper with time and effort. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmm....I know this longing...and I am both a fan of Blues and Serenades, so you couldn't miss with me...but this is touchingly honest and I was moved by the sincerity of this piece. Enjoyed much. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for reading Wynter, but I have to ask you, why aren't you reading your mail? Get with it sister. *hugs* Oh that was sweet of you to say. I sat down last night and let my thoughts go, instead of picking my work apart like I normally do, I just let the words flow. Thank you Serenity~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Out of sight and presumably out of mind but always by your side, if you want me to be. ====================================== the soft spoken devotion and longing in those lines touched me in places deep... this whole poem is a lovely reflective piece of one accepting things as they come to be and finding their peace in that. wonderful writing poetess. what a great smile you have jm You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) I love it, sweet friend! (smiles) Friendship and love always fill your sweet words! BRAVO!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Janet Marie for understanding my ramblings in their entirety. Acceptance and inner peace go hand in hand. I appreciate your nice compliments. Noah you are much to kind, I do enjoy this forum but it's not easy to keep up with. There are so many talented writers such as yourself, it is a pleasure indeed to be a small part of passions. Thank you. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi, I found this lil treasure |
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