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Sitting in a Hole
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Sitting in a Hole |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Sometimes you dig a hole so deep You can't tell where you started You look up at the edges steep And sit down broken hearted Its never easy to admit That your own hands betrayed you So there alone in thought you sit Begging to know what made you Sometimes you then cry out in pain Waiting on friends to save you Sometimes you wallow there in vain And let the hole enslave you Sometimes you keep on digging deep Because its all you know But those who climb the edges steep Are those the hole lets go |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hmmmm.... and what.... k ind of hole may you be referring to? (heh heh.. wink wink) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Much truth written there Kevin. If we fall in a hole, it has usually been dug by ourselves. And sometimes it's a mighty steep climb indeed to get out of it. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes when too many parts are out of our control...it is a learning experience preparing us for greater challenges...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kevin, you look at life with such honesty, and seem to view those pitfalls objectively. It's a mature and openly honest approach to life that many never learn. Well done, both in thought and in the presentation. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Kevin, too many times we dig ourselves into a hole.And sometimes it's hard to get out of.Truthful words here. Peaches |
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