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Separate Paths |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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So we're living on separate paths longing to go the same direction Still, the odds we can outlast For no relationship is perfection My love for you, an immesurable amount I've gotten to know you inside Where it truly counts Often I'm left tongue tied Wondering what the future holds for us Will there be happiness awaiting? A bond of mutual trust Here I am anticipating I long to be there when you awake And greet you with good morning kiss Happy moments we would make I never felt love like this [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-02-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Sweet!  I love it!  Just when we think we've been loved in every way, someone comes along and does it better. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG KISS ON LIPS) Oh Joanna, I have faith in my heart that we will together, and our love will flourish on! (smiles) I love you so very much, and may our paths diverge in love! (kiss on lips) I love you, sweet Joanna, you are all my heart desires! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Anticipation what the future holds is one of the best parts of being in love. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hope it goes the way you want it too. Very nice.. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My love for, an immesurable amount I've gotten to know you inside Where it truly counts Often I'm left tongue tied =============================== arent the discoveries the most wonderful part... after reading this cadenced kissed poem of promise... its not hard to figure out why you have that lovely smile on your face Well done poetess Rose. jm |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is sweet RosePetal. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The beginning of love is so sweet. This is wonderful Joanna If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Joanna, you've been writing a lot of hits lately...and I'm liking them all! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Isn’t it wonderful to write something that you feel so strongly? Enjoyed reading your thoughts. Kathleen (Kay) "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I do believe love is in the air Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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