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Should I Be Gone
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Should I Be Gone |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Should I be gone When tomorrow shows up Don’t let the sun catch you With tears in your eyes Don’t cry for me Instead remember how it used to be When we loved like to day was the last Don’t let your face a frown cast Just remember how much I loved you Should tomorrow show up without me It will only put your world in a different view I know you will miss me Just remember the good times Should you think of me For should tomorrow show up without me My memories and the love they carry Shall forever be with you Though I may be out of view I am watching over you Forever and a day Just watch the sunrise The way we did For as the sunrises You will feel my love It will be an early morning ray That will keep you warm all day So should tomorrow show up with out me Just remember that I shall always love you © icyheart aka Alan Dec.1, 2001 http://www.geocities.com/icyhearts/Tomorrow.html |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Alan, this is sooooooo beautiful! I cried reading this, your loving heart shines with promises and compassion for your departed love! (sigh) I pray for happiness to come for both of you! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-02-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A stunning declaration of love and its memories......The sun you bring with your words will never set. You have presented this poem beautifully, Alan. I love the web page. It is incredibly beautiful with your own special romantic touch.  **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Incredible write here Alan. Good to see you here. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is a beautifully done request. Such a small one too. to be remembered... Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Alan this is a sad but sweet declaration of love. I enjoyed. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Alan, so good to see you again. This is such a tender goodbye notice. All is well? "It will be an early morning ray That will keep you warm all day So should tomorrow show up with out me Just remember that I shall always love you" |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hoping all is well with you. This is a heartfelt request |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Noah my friend.. Thank you for your kind comments Startime.. thank you. I am glad you like the web site. Nancy... Thank you.. It is good to see that you are still here Temptress.. Thank you for reading and replying. Andrea... I am glad you liked it. Are you still up fpr that picnic? Midnitesun.. how goes it in the far north sweet lady.. thanks for reading this little thing RosePetal... I am glad you liked it. As for the poem.. lets just say I was in a bit of a bad mood. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank You Vandana |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Saying goodbye is so hard. But you do say it beautifully here Allan. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What lovely romantic thoughts, Alan. Just want every woman wants, to know she is loved above all. All writing comes |
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