Open Poetry #17 |
Trapped |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Heartstrings wrapped around my soul all tied up, nowhere to go still feel ragged from this loss loving held too high a cost. Held by chains which won't release yearning for some honest peace knowledge of mistaken love not removing heart pain of. Vainly gripped by undertow quicksand pulling downward slow no respite for cornered mind happiness so hard to find. Many moons have passd me by while I sat alone and cried tired of this constant pain want to live and love again. Ties of past love; set me free else there's nothing left of me. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 12-02-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sweetie my heart hurts for you. I know it is so hard to lose love..but truly it is priceless and was once worth the cost. I hope and pray that someday, very soon, love will reach out to you and heal the pain you now feel so deeply. A man, a knight among men, who will capture your heart with the joy and tenderness of forever love...that is my dearest wish for you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, it saddens me so much to feel this constant sorrow in your heart! Love may not be with you right now, but in your golden heart, you will soon be embraced by true love that's worthy of your loving angelic heart! Always listen to your heart and believe in yourself, and you will find true happiness! I swear! (big hugggssssss) I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, There is always a new day. *L* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra~You sound a little down today. Wish we lived closer. I would call you up and get you giggling. (or we could watch 'Somewhere in Time' together and share a box of tissues!) Take care sweetie, better days are ahead. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When we finally become weary of the constant pain that gives us the strength to move on...for how can we be ready to love another if we want to hold onto the past thinking our future could never outdo it...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no respite for cornered mind happiness so hard to find. Many moons have passd me by while I sat alone and cried tired of this constant pain want to live and love again. Ties of past love; set me free else here's nothing left of me. ======================================= so many lines in this touch in places deep... sometimes our heart chains us to things our heads know we are better off free of. A bittersweet-blue write of truth Sandra... with every rhyme there is release. well done poetess Cat jm he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Very good, a heartfelt poem telling of the past. And now we need the tale of the ftutre happiness Joe Lamando |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This hurts truly........it has touched my heart so deeply...or is it just my mood? Sandra....May you get over all these chains of pains.. Take care dearest.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh sandra, I know just how you feel. There are times when I feel trapped too! You're going to be just fine, and happiness is on your horizon. Hang in there sweets! RP |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hang in there Sandra. Sometimes when you least expect it, love has a way of popping into your life. I so enjoyed this! |
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