Open Poetry #17 |
Adieu |
Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
The construction site On the corner of Colin Clark Almost complete Safe for the wet paint They seem to cry out I am ready! For my intended purposes I am ready to serve My sentiments exactly I am ready to serve Like a debutante at her first ball Hope I am not a disappointment Skies a-glow with different hues Setting sun Bidding farewell to A marvellous chapter of my life Purple clinging glories Bloomed in the light of dawn Bow their heads now mourning Adieu to you too. [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Mon, this made me cry, my heart goes out to you! (sad sigh) One door may close, but another will open, and love and happiness will come out and a whole new joy will open for you! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Mon! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
And now you turn a page and with courage and determination you start a whole new chapter of your life. I know you will do just fine. BRAVO!!! I love the way you wrote this. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah now, this is one I wish I had written... jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mon Cherie, What a way to say goodbye. *L* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very sad, well done poem. Hugs Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful way to step forward onto the next avenue in your life. A wistful goodbye smile, then onto the next adventure. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thank you guyz! Thanks for reading this and enjoying it... Thanks for replying with such comforting messages... It soothes the soul |
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