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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

0 posted 2001-12-01 11:14 AM

Moon Sail

The moon was full and floating
in a sea of clouds so soft
it seemed it moved with swift breeze aft
across white splaying froth

A golden halo ‘round it formed
in holy light displayed
I knew it sailed with your delight
for the vision was angel made

If reverent sky beholds the dawn
and leaves me longing thus
for luna landscape ocean sky
and memories painful thrust

I understand this place was gleaned
of scarlet sundown’s cast
and ne'er will these eyes glimpse again
the moon sail night of last.
______
repost

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-12-01 11:38 AM

A golden halo ‘round it formed
in holy light displayed
I knew it sailed with your delight
for the vision was angel made

If reverent sky beholds the dawn
and leaves me longing thus
for luna landscape ocean sky
and memories painful thrust

I understand this place was gleaned
of scarlet sundown’s cast
and ne'er will these eyes glimpse again
the moon sail night of last.
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gawwwwwd I love this poem...
the title alone is pure poetry.
Wasnt that moon SPECTACULAR!!!!
I was on the porch several times last night watching its blue rise....
and at about 4 this morn I woke up and it had my whole room lit up through the blinds.
It was so bright it gave off a white-hot glow in the brisk Dec. air.

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-12-01 01:33 PM

Oh Martie! This is wonderful! I am so glad you reposted it so others could enjoy.
YOU are an incredible writer poetess,
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-01 02:02 PM

*sigh* I am so glad you reposted this one or else I never would have been able to see the beautiful vision of it. Absolutely stunning. The moon has such magic to me. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-12-01 02:06 PM

Martie,
A delight to read. *L*

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-12-01 02:08 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this vision is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) I love looking up at the moon and watching it shine, this is sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Your words are always so gorgeous, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-12-01 05:39 PM

First, what JM said...

second...thanks for the smile...

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-12-01 05:59 PM

This is very nice, Martie, very comfortng imgery here

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Denise

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Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-12-01 09:07 PM

This is exquisite, Martie! Beautifully done!

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