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Marge's Challenge.....Butterscotch Sky
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Marge's Challenge.....Butterscotch Sky |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Moon came in breathless whispered sigh Lushly kissing butterscotch sky Scattering stars with careless whim Singing drowsy lullaby hymn Biding land a soothing sweet sleep Promising to cradle, and keep Sweetest dreams to fulfill one's soul Wash away burden of day's toll Refreshing spirit, peaceful rest Come soon morrow, be then your best Once again relish this good day Find spring in step along your way Greeting neighbor a friendly "hi!" warm yourself in butterscotch sky ~SEA~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A fine sonnet you give us To rise to Marge’s challenge, I don’t see many Butterscotch Skies, But I look mostly at night, Glad you gave us a look through your eyes Gloom |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well look at this! When I grow up...I want to write like You... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Warm yourself in butterscotch sky. Love it.*L* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, this is ocean smooth, and vivid to hear. Keth. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sea~Very good! You are pickin' them up and puttin' them down, in this challenge! Don't know how you do them so fast girl! Maybe I'll do another after I take care of this cold with more cough med.  Hugs!"A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Professor, just look with your heart and you can see anything you want to!!  thanks, I'm happy you liked this Sunshine, I could never have done this without the gentle touch of my mentor. Her guidance is everything to me Seymour, thank you for reading!! Kethry, that is kind of you thanks! Nancy, I hope you feel better soon...go easy on that cold med  ~SEA |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This is so delightfully beautiful...and delicious I may add.... since I love butterscutsh's flavor...LOLWonderful Sea.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! (smiles) This is a breathtakingly beautiful challenge, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe dearest heart, oh how long is it since I've said that. ((((hugs)))) (I know far too long darling girl) But as I happened to be on site as it were I couldn't but stop to bathe myself in your butterscotch sky. This is utterly uterly wonderful, just as you are.  I promise I will be back soon, I think I might enter the lists so to speak with a stab at the contest. However after reading this I know I won't win. Truly Circe this is gorgeous, your writing has grown so since I've been away. Before it was wonderful now it is absolutely fabulous. Love and warm stuff as always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nicely written SEA - you definitely have a way with words.. jwesley |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
A delicious delight..mmm mmmm butterscotch |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
woohoooo...a challenge well met. Loved this, Susan. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I absolutely love butterscotch and to mix it with such wonderfull words makes the flavour even more pleasing to me. BRAVO!!! I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I sure would enjoy a butterscotch sky right about now, or maybe butterscotch syrup on French vanilla ice cream? It's going to be hard for Marge to wade through so many sticky sweet treats! Good luck. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Moon came in breathless whispered sigh Lushly kissing butterscotch sky Scattering stars with careless whim Singing drowsy lullaby hymn Biding land a soothing sweet sleep Promising to cradle, and keep Sweetest dreams to fulfill one's soul Wash away burden of day's toll =================================== From one lovely phrase and image comes so many more lovely ones. Beautiful, graceful writing Sea. he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--You did a great job with this..lovely rhyme and flow..and imagery so sweet! |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Oh Sea, this is so lovely. Such sweet words. I truely enjoyed. Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ So uniquely YOU~ I'm liking your inspired thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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