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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-11-30 10:51 PM

how can we regret
that which we will not dare?
if the step is not taken
how can we beware?

within this lover's heart
patient in space and time
I wait quietly my dear
to read your lover's rhyme

should I never say to you
that love is what I feel
then how will I ever know
if my love is yet real

time will take it's toll
and I will go away
silent in my love
regretting what I could not say

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-11-30 11:00 PM

So true, sometimes we never know unless we take that chance. Excellent advice, Sharon.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-11-30 11:01 PM

Sometimes that regret stays with us for so long. I know the feeling of never having said it, and wishing that I would have. You write of this so well. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-11-30 11:42 PM

enjoyed...I suppose it would be worth a risk to see if your love was desired...for love should go where it is desired...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-30 11:44 PM

better to have said. . . than to leave the words unspoken. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-12-01 01:09 AM

Good poem..made me think of aspects of my own life. Soemtimes we think we're so strong and daring....except when it comes to love. Then the walls come up and we will risk nothing...in order to regret nothing. Then we regret not having taken the chance. Good write, made me ponder

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2001-12-01 01:39 AM

Sharon,

It's sometimes harder not to say the things we want to say, than to say them.

Then the time comes and we do not get the chance to say what we wanted to say.

If you get a chance, read some of my earlier posts, I can definately relate.

My advise - risk it if its worth it.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

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