Open Poetry #17 |
Wonder... (Behind the Eyes of a Poet) |
PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
It can often be a Song, A Song, sung so sweetly It will punch you in the gut to let you know its there, Touch you so deep as to touch Your very Soul A Movie, life so real It will bring about a smile Then, in turn bring you weeping to Tears Touch- your very being As close, as losing someone you love Making its point by bringing it close to home Unlike, any other day But, one bluest of blue--seeming, To flow on forever. A moment in time- that seems to stand still As it takes your breath away it captures But, could never take its place. [This message has been edited by PoetriPrincess (edited 11-30-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a breathtaking Entrance into Passions! I for one sincerely hope you find your way to calling this place your New Home! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful first post, I hope to read more of your work. Welcome to passions. Regards, Olias. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
or, it can be a poem. . . a poem like this. . . welcome. . . very well done. . . hope to see more of your work. . . please take a look around. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much! Welcome |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Welcome to Passions, the friendliest site I know. Enjoyed. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Breath-taking indeed...A warm welcome to you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL FIRST POST!! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs, NancyLee~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice poem, welcome to passions. Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'A moment in time- that seems to stand still As it takes your breath away it captures But, could never take its place.' With an entrance like this, you will find this site very welcoming you with open poetic arms. Well done! WELCOME, PoetriPrincess. |
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