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In She Walks, My Fantasy
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In She Walks, My Fantasy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Fifteen minutes....a quarter of an hour. In she walks, headed for the shower. I meet her there with my open arms. She’s standing there in just her charms. Smiling that wicked little smile so neat Eyes wide open promising us a treat. Looking like a hundred dollar bill I know I can and I am sure she will. Take those charms that are a sight Lavish me with them all the night Keep me holding your ever near For I love when you come in dear. The door was locked with a click as we flew up the stairs so quick With laughter and only a smile My oh my, gonna last a while. Take me to your land of dreams of lucid falls and crystal streams Let me love you ever so tenderly Let me hold you ever passionately And as we go jump into our bed with visions of love in our head Just remember that you will be my love that returns in fantasy. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Magnus!  This is a bit of a change for you! Mmmm lovely, sensual and oh so..... *watch it Nancy!*  EXCITING!~hugs, Nancy~ No wonder I missed you at coffee time.  ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh......this is so sensually beautiful. You sure know how to write love and passion. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this sounded like a lot of fun! Enjoyed this one Magnus ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I take it that wasn't a cold shower ... guess its safe to say you were a lucky stiff. An excellent piece of work Magnus. Top quality!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like one of the fun evenings. Much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a very good poem indeed. i regret i have not read alot of your but now after this one i'm planing on it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now these are some of lifes enjoyable moments...James |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A subtle change from Magnus is a welcome read indeed... |
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