Open Poetry #17 |
Am I Losing You? |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Am I Losing You? Oh where oh where can my true love be? She seems so close yet so far away from me. I thought I knew exactly who my lover was to be until she showed her displeasure with me. Much to soon for this love to turn painfuly demure and as my heart approaches totally confused and unsure I pause to pray these hopeful heartfelt words... "God I love her and whatever you do please don't let me lose her." JamesLee November30 2001 |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
James, You touched my heart with this one.I hope this doens't happen to you my dear sweet friend. Peaches |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good luck, James Sometims it seems that love is so much about insecurity and fear of loss. I wish it was not that way. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sweet James...I join my prayers to yours that she may see the tenderness of the love you feel for her and offer you the love that your heart so desires. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have faith in you, James, go after her! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James, this is soooooooo tender. You are so dear "If your ship doesn't come in, swim out to it." ~Jonathan Winters |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
James, I hope she realizes how lucky of a lady she is to have your love. Best Wishes to you always, RP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, my friend. . . we must lose to find. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah sweet friend....you won't lose her! Think positive....think 'love thoughts' ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
simply beautiful ever deep...runs |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Very powerful sentiments. If you truly love her, let that be your guide, and all else will be right. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A beautiful song of longing. I hope all works out for you James. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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