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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-11-29 10:01 PM

                  Craving
she
hungered for
a man
        who
        could feel
        a ray
        of her soul
        to reveal
strong enough
to take
a stand

weak enough
to still
need
        understanding
        the give
        and take
        of a
        life you
        can make
an appetite
a hunger
can feed

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-11-29 10:37 PM

Hmm..and this is so far down the page, BECAUSE?

I do LOVE this, Lady.

Your writing is always amazing to me.

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2001-11-29 10:43 PM

i hope she turns out to find such a man...
peace and love

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-29 10:50 PM

Very nice view of a real person, wanting, needing, giving in weakness and in strength.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-11-29 11:13 PM

To cuddle between his strength and weakness...

Wonderful write ..and so much true..

Thank you lady..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2001-11-30 12:13 PM

1slick_lady - I have to say that I read this three times. Each time I read it I tried to come to a decision for a reply. I could not. But what I can say is that you have written well about a woman's feelings and wants. I have learned from your writing, and I thank you. It's very telling, and wanting...

BC

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2001-11-30 12:14 PM

Oooooo, coooool.

"an appetite
a hunger
can feed"

WOW! I like this!

And I feel a mind meld comin' on!
(Hey Spock, come here, quick!)

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2001-11-30 10:49 AM

still hungry here!!!!!!!

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

PoetriPrincess
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 55
CA / U.S.A

8 posted 2001-11-30 10:55 AM

I agree with Krawdad, I liked that part also.
Enjoyed your Muse

Friends & Poems,
From Poetri Princess

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2001-11-30 12:39 PM

you've described the cravings of a woman precisely!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-11-30 01:41 PM

I like the form of this helen. . . it's different for you. . .

and of course, you speak the words well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2001-11-30 01:44 PM

It is so easy to feel the craving in your words. You have penned perfectly what every woman wants in a man. BRAVO!!!! **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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