Open Poetry #17 |
Thoughts In The Night |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“THOUGHTS IN THE NIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I stand in night’s darkness blending into the shadows, as I gaze into the heavens and then close my eyes… They shut out the light of stars shining above, but even though I cannot see, I’m still with desire with you… It consumes me, penetrating my being, and I sense the soft evening breeze, your delicate kisses that I know… Lips sweeter than wine, moist, touching, as lovers caress, I see all of this in my mind, but now only, my thoughts in the night… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, such lovely thoughts in the night Bill. Enjoying your romantic words so much! Nice to have you back here.... ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i like this...I have lots of thoughts like this too! : ) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now I see why Maureen likes you so much Well done. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes, Interloper, Bill speaks Maureen's language of romance....and who hasn't gazed at the stars with longing for completeness? Very Lovely, Bill....good to see ya! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"even though I cannot see, I’m still with desire with you…" Wow. That says so much, with so few words. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great Bill - afraid I'm definitely looking through your eyes. But hey, at least you still have the memories - and those are worth a lot....I know. jwesley |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Enchantress - it's nice to be back, as one thing it does is keeps me sane with everything going on in my life right now. Thanks for reading, thanks for the visit, and romance, a'hhhhhh, I love it.... RosePetal - your special, and thanks for your kind words. Many thoughts like these we all share... Interloper - she is a special person, and I feel the same. Thanks for coming by... serenity - the stars are the way to the heart, the eyes the way to the soul. Have both, and one has romance... And it's good to see you also... Midnitesun - your words are kind, and telling, especially with these few words that I wrote. Thank you.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good expression of your thoughts Bill...james |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Romantic thoughts here! Its wonderful to see you here again. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I stand in night’s darkness blending into the shadows, as I gaze into the heavens and then close my eyes" I love this, so soft.....tender words here Bill....lovely... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I love this.Such romantic words. Peaches |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JamesMichael - thank you for your reply to these words, it is always welcome.... Temptress - it is very good to be back posting my thoughts, and to read the replies, and how they might be touching someone... Greeneyes - soft and tender are the words that come from my heart. Thank you for yours this night... peaches73533 - thank you for reading this, and perhaps feeling what I did when I wrote it... |
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