Open Poetry #17 |
Soft Reminders..for BC |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Soft Reminders This night I soak in thoughts of you warmth overriding the fears of the morn, mind no longer pushing buttons, no longer doubting the truth of words. This imprisoned heart, needs no pardon, holds custody of only one, having tasted your lips of love. Lying back, your shadow guards me, towering over me. I feel the mystery of you joining me in float, your lore, too tempting at times, causing a rise in temperature. I labor in thought, droplets trickling down my forehead, working myself up into a lather over you. I take you in eagerly, immersed in the awe of you, knowing that I will bathe in you with forever thoughts this night, and come morn, will feel the cleansing of a new day... and soft reminders of you, once again. ~Wynter A welcome back to a very romantic poet...we missed you BC....you bring out the romance in my words.*s "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STANDING OVATION!!!!OH BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!!He will be thrilled by this sensually romantic poem. Perfectly suited to him and woven by the pen of a master. BRAVO!!! **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you are a master at romantic writings. I love it, and I thank you from the soft spots in my heart. Made my day... This really should have at least a few replies... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful poem, and a good tribute to a wonderful poetic friend. I'll echo those thoughts, Maureen. Glad to have Bill back in here again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes! Good write Maureen, and we are all glad to have our romantic writer back home with us! Good one! Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow. Now that is magnificent Maureen. I love your positve and romantic side Hooray for you, BC. You have performed an excellent feat! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you all..I am glad my words brought a smile to anyone's face. "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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