Open Poetry #17 |
Lonely....haiku |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
End of dreamy times splashed upon tears of oceans lonely star of sea Charisma ~*TMP*~ ~*Theresia~* [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful Haiku Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Beautifully said and perfectly displayed...interesting how all of us will be able to relate to this. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is awesome ! Nobody does it better ! Tee-Hee ... I swiped-a-graphic~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep, this is beautiful, but then, I'm sure you knew I'd love it |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Beautiful indeed! Charisma, where have you been? I have missed you and your poetry. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
shines still in the night sending rays of love to sea remember, my love sorry, just came out. . . wonderful my friend. . . you indeed have been missed. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
AWWWWWWW charisma this is soooooooooooooooo beautiful i just luv it when you write these haikus... muaah on cheeks2uSweetie *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Interloper: Thank you dear friend Startime: Thank you my friend ((hugs)) Marge: Thank you Marge, I am truly glad that you like it ((Hugs)) Sea: Glad to know that you like it Sea RosePetal: Thank you for the beautiful, and I think that I lost my muse somewhere that's why I didn't post much lately Sven: awwwwwwwwwww.....that is a sweet reply, and you knew that I would love it ((Hugs)) CoCo: I'm sooooooooo glad that you like it, and *wow* I love these warm reply.....thank you dear friend |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It's about time I saw your name in here posting a new one for us. Okay, so I admit it, I haven't been around much myself but hey......we all have our favorites and you my dear friend are definitely one. What a beautiful Haiku and the graphic is perfect for it. Now let's see you post a four line / 5 verse / treasure ( in rhyme of course ) for our hungry eyes. Yes, it is a challenge but I am allowed you know. Nice to see you here. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW Charisma, glad you did post one of your suberb haikus again. Just beautiful Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: autsjjjjjjjjjjjj Mark, a challenge from you oh my, think I must find my muse first, haven't you seen her lately maybe??? if so, please send her back so I can work to met this challenge....but well, maybe I can toss you an apple to ease your hungry a bit And soooooooo good to see you too my dear friend, 'cause your comments are always appreciated by me, and you know that right Titia: I am happy to know that you like my haikus, thank you dear friend |
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