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Open Poetry #16

Adventures.......Tanka

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-10-07 10:34 AM

restless adventures
drift upon wild watercourse
mighty waterfall
noisy sounds disturb silence
find comfort in tranquil lake

Charisma
~TMP~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-07 10:59 AM

Charisma, this is beautiful

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-10-07 11:16 AM

Charisma,
Well done, enjoyed *L*

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2001-10-07 11:26 AM

Very good.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-07 11:59 AM

This is just BEAUTIFUL!! Enjoyed! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

5 posted 2001-10-07 01:18 PM

I only have one word for this Charisma: WOW!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-10-07 05:23 PM

Absolutely wonderful!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-10-08 06:18 AM

Charisma~
What a lovely piece of writing~
Exquisitely worded to cascade into the pool of tranquility~
Yes ! I feel it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-10-08 09:19 AM

Very pretty, Charisma.
Sandra

shawana
Junior Member

since 2000-11-02

Posts 14

9 posted 2001-10-08 06:07 PM

no comment necessary!...;-)
except this:
waterfalls............ so serene
so tremendous!
such power!
beautifully!
N I C E!

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