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Can I Tell you a Secret?
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Can I Tell you a Secret? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Can I Tell you a Secret? Can I tell you a secret? whisper it against the sweet curve of your flowered ear, light it with the power of my breath, it is a love song you know, it is blues it is the opera of my heart. Do you want to hear? Can you listen to this wind that tortures the bluff and blows the surf across reflection? It is hungry for a lusting ear it is a fruit filled ambrosia. Your listening has music that fills me, the quiet ear sings so sweet with eyes like trumpets and breath, curved violin, you finger my rhythm guitar as you slide towards my lips. Can I tell you a secret? Do you want to hear? You must listen or the sound just falls beneath the microphone into the orchestra pit and I will never play this song again. _______________ (I said I would never play this song again, but I am, for this is a repost..LOL...sigh) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Martie, I am so glad you posted it again. For I missed it before and this is one beautiful song sweet lady. Enjoyed..this is a magical piece indeed. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, I liked this, so I'm glad you played it again.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Sweet poet lady ... you can replay beauty like this any day of the week~ 'Do you want to hear? Can you listen to this wind that tortures the bluff and blows the surf across reflection?' I DO want to hear ! ! I CAN listen ! ! I hear such lovely reflections of you ~ Thank you always for being a poetess~ Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Martie-- and what a very beautiful repost it is!! I missed it the first go round, so I am glad that you sent it for a second spin! Beautiful work as always, you write straight from the heart!! Take care. Amy  "I could kiss you in the rain forever. Turn all of your pain to pleasure. Fill up your days with sunlight, make the passion last every night. Give you |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
well, I for one, am glad you did. This is exquisite poetry! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Touching and quiet. Nicely done, Martie. Bob |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
shhhh....come here, my nether friend and listen till the very end for I am back come to play with you a duet we shall weave, just we two so when you're ready, to pen a poem this is just to say, I'm ready, and home! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful song it is, Martie! Play it as often as you wish! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Still beautiful, *L* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And what a repost it is. This is Fantabulous! What gentle, sensual images. My monitor is smoking |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Martie, it is a song that should play again and again, thank you for the repost..very gentle smile |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sighhh Martie, this is beautiful very very beautiful! Maree |
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