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Moon Of Love |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Moon Of Love Glorious moon in all your splendor lovers hearts do.. surrender ~*~ Powerless under your spell floating around like.. a carousel ~*~ Moonbeams cascading as they dance souls.. lost in sweet romance ~*~ Lovers entwined in soft embrace glimmering moonlight.. upon their face ~*~ Shadows falling all around reaching earth.. without a sound ~*~ Scattered stars twinkling above smiling.. upon the moon of love ~*~ Moon and stardust become as one sprinkled down.. for lovers fun ~*~ Caught in a trance by the moons glow bonded and sealed with.. love below. ~sunshinemist~ smiles ~Marie~ Keep the Faith [This message has been edited by sunshinemist (edited 10-06-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marie... This is magical !! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nancy, thank you so much! This time of year the moon does cast its magical spell on me. ~warm hugs, Marie~ |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Ohhh now this is beautiful! I wish the moon of love would shine on me for a while! "Powerless under your spell floating around like.. a carouel" you meant carousel right....hehe typo |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Rosepetal, Thank you kindly and for pointing out my error.....hehehe, first edit for me!  hugs, Mariesmiles ~Marie~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So lovely! This has a great flow to it Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Beautiful!!!! LITL, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Melissa, thank you so much for the read. The moon and love has always been a great combination. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Heather, thank you kindly. May you get caught under that moon of love! smiles ~Marie~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oops forgot to add this to my library! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very sensual and vivid write. Loved this one! All writing comes |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Rosepetal, Thank you for adding me!  smiles ~Marie~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
LoneWolf, Thank you so much for the read and nice comments. Glad that you like it. smiles ~Marie~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I am partial to Moonlight, but I suppose we, as poets, are all partial to it. This is a beautiful poem. Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh, this is charmingly pretty. Beautifully written If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunshineMist~ One of my favorite poetic subjects~ Such a magnetic draw~ Lovely thoughts shining here~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is completely beautiful, a favorite moon poem. Sandra |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Temptress, Thank you for your lovely comment. The moon and love work so well together. ~hugs~~~~~~~~~~ Tracey,thank you for reading. We are all moon people, I guess. ~hugs~~~~~~~~~~ Marge, thanks so much for your lovely comments. Feelings seem to come out strong with each full moon. ~hugs~~~~~~~~~~ catalinamoon, thank you for the read, us moonies have to stick together.  ~hugs~I really appreciate my favorite moon lovers! smiles ~Marie~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Vanda, Thank You! smiles and hugs smiles ~Marie~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Marie, so very lovely..very gentle smile |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Logan, thank you so much for your sweet comment. Love makes the world go around. smiles ~Marie~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love the Moon and all its mystery~ lovely words, and thanks for sharing this.... Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovely... ~Tier |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Green Eyes, thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed. ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Tier, thank you kindly! ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This poem was absolutely beautiful. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Domzi, many thanks, glad you liked it and it is very nice to meet you too! smiles ~Marie~ |
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