Open Poetry #16 |
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Satin and Steel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738![]() |
Now I know the taste of satin seeded lips mounded passion and the needful press of chest-- I pray for sleep-- forgetfulness. Now I know the ice of steel the urge to love the unreal "real" a witchful wish becoming flame each difference remaining same. Fire Ice Night and day... I do not simply change this way. There is a path to follow thus-- from plus to negative to plus... Conduit of the battery-- active receptivity-- a constant path hidden in me-- the charge of electricity. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-06-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Good Morning! As sleep may not have came to you....but I dream of the solid constancy you have mastered. Even in darkness..at least it's consistent. Beautiful write. Sincerely, Regina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a constant path hidden in me-- the charge of electricity. ============================== this I already knew... youre the flame baby....just ask archy ![]() We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away, |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful....it feels good to be able to write like this doesn't it? I'm so happy for you!!! Keep them coming! ![]() ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Really really good..thats all I can come up with here. Sandra |
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Ven Member
since 2001-10-01
Posts 102U.K. |
I agree, very nice ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Charged up your batteries, heh? My energizer bunny is in the closet today. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds like a man needs to be Eveready with you! ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all, and I am SO TORN---I want so badly to go for the obvious "cheap shot" regarding batteries, but alas, I am wearing a shiny new star this week, so I am feeling compelled to behave....so, I'll just say thanks...and exit with a ![]() |
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