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Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2001-10-06 02:19 AM

Its wrong to love you so
but the sweet whisper of your heart
won't let go of mine.
Dream me softly, my sweet lover
as I write you passionate cliched love poetry.
Do I care that I am witnessing the slow burn
of my tender heart again as you touch it?
I do not care for it is mostly the burn I ache for
as long
as it is yours.
So speak with the fingers of your soul
to my breaking solitude
and sing me a story of how your sunshine steals
my breath beneath the piercing silver moon's arms of light.
Just tend my lips with your own as we move our heads
to the slow breeze of passion grinding against the world.
Write love letters to the feather of my voice
as its tendrils touch upon the quiver of your skin.
I believe you are mine if only briefly
so let me have
one
last
thought of you
before you leave the solace of my heart again.
I love you, Sunshine.
Smile upon me as I ache for you to be the last one
to ever touch my heart again.

I am many.

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

1 posted 2001-10-06 03:10 AM

Sun's only a few hours away. I'll say hi to it for you. *grins* The world's greatest metaphor, neh?

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

2 posted 2001-10-06 10:34 AM

As you can see, I love the moon as much as you love the sunlight, so for me, this is a wonderful poem.

Here's hoping that your sunshine feels the same way.

This is just beautiful.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-10-07 10:19 PM

Siofra,

I am amazed that such a lovely and tender poem such as this had only the two replies when I came across it. It's soft flow brought such peace as I read it. Thank you.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-07 10:32 PM

I believe you are mine if only briefly
so let me have
one
last
thought of you
before you leave the solace of my heart again.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
WOW!! Guess I went to bed too early last night and missed this beautiful piece. This is fantastic...a heart crying out with love. Enjoyed, ~NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

5 posted 2001-10-07 10:58 PM

Very beautiful writing.
LITL,
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-10-08 01:10 AM

Such a touching write.

Smile upon me as I ache for you to be the last one
to ever touch my heart again.

Such a lovely ending too

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-10-08 01:24 AM

What a beautiful, softly flowing love song.

"Dream me softly, my sweet lover
as I write you passionate cliched love poetry.
Do I care that I am witnessing the slow burn
of my tender heart again as you touch it?"

Burning passion is really cool.

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