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Open Poetry #16

Can This Love be Saved

bonnie1961
Junior Member

since 2001-09-30

Posts 44
ny, usa

0 posted 2001-10-05 02:54 PM

SEEMS LIKE WE'RE JUST HOLDING ON
LIKE I'M LOSING MY BEST FRIEND
AND THE LOVE THAT USED TO BE SO STRONG
HAS FINALLY REACHED IT'S END

WE USED TO BE THE PERFECT PAIR
BUT LATELY, WE'VE LOST OUR WAY
WE JUST DON'T TALK OR SEEM TO CARE
WE'VE RUN OUT OF THINGS TO SAY

CAN THIS LOVE BE SAVED?
OR IS IT JUST TOO LATE
COULD WE GET BACK WHAT SEEMS LOST FOREVER
CAN THIS LOVE BE SAVED?

BABY, WE COULD LIGHT THE FIRE
THAT USED TO BURN SO BRIGHT
JUST FEED THE SPARK LEFT IN OUR HEARTS
LET'S BURN IT UP TONIGHT!

AND MAYBE, IF WE TRY AGAIN
WE'LL FIND OUR WAY ONCE MORE
WE CAN GET BACK WHAT SEEMS LOST FOREVER
AND MAKE IT BETTER THAN BEFORE

BUT....

CAN THIS LOVE BE SAVED
OR IS IT JUST TOO LATE
CAN WE GET BACK WHAT SEEMS LOST FOREVER
OR IS THIS OUR FINAL FATE??

bonnie1961
Junior Member

since 2001-09-30

Posts 44
ny, usa

1 posted 2001-10-05 02:56 PM

ooooooooops... i'm "yelling" again... sorry

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2001-10-05 04:38 PM

Hi Bonnie,

I like this, it reads like a sad love song.

Yes, lower case print would be preferrable!

Cor

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-10-05 07:24 PM

Very nicely done Bonnie! This piece would suit a melody perfectly, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-10-05 07:32 PM

Time will tell...James

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