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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2001-10-04 07:16 PM



~*The Kiss Of Angels*~

Memories drift gently in
Landing on soft pillows of the soul
Sweet fragrance of rose
Lends comfort to yesterday's dreams

Each thought...carefully wrapped
In loving remember...
Is tucked away in safest corners
Of the heart

As a gentle breeze touches the cheek
A smile crosses the lips
And peace is found in knowing
It is the kiss of angels

~vlraynes



With much love to my sweetest friend, Marge.
In memory of her mother, Beverly, and sister Shari.
May you always find comfort in knowing that
they are your angels.



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-04-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-04 07:18 PM


What else can I say?.....BEAUTIFUL!!!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-04 07:31 PM


       Just Beautiful!!!  

Warm smiles,
~Marie~

Alan
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3 posted 2001-10-04 07:36 PM


sweet and beautiful!!!
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4 posted 2001-10-04 07:56 PM


awwww I like that

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cpalmer
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5 posted 2001-10-04 08:11 PM


Vicky,
I know Marge will love this very much...this is so beautiful!
Love ya
Cindi

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-10-04 09:07 PM


This is lovely.

Memories drift gently in
Landing on soft pillows of the soul

I love those lines. Beautiful images

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Honeybee
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7 posted 2001-10-04 09:08 PM



This is deeply touching and very beautiful!  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-10-05 01:03 AM


this is indeed beautiful in both its feather light poetic phrasing and imagery and its gift of intend...
very sweet Vicky, see will adore this...
your twos friendship is a treat for us to watch  

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

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9 posted 2001-10-05 01:06 AM


Beautiful, Vicky.....I think Marge will love a poem like this.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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10 posted 2001-10-05 01:08 AM


As a gentle breeze touches the cheek
A smile crosses the lips
And peace is found in knowing
It is the kiss of angels
~~~~~~~~

This is so touching
and so outstanding...beautiful!!

EagleOne
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11 posted 2001-10-05 05:46 AM


Excellent!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2001-10-05 06:17 AM


very sweet Vicky...nice  picture too.

((hugss))
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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13 posted 2001-10-05 06:21 AM


Vicky~
I believe that my angels sent YOU to watch over me~
To catch my tears~
To share my smiles~
To be the sweetest little angel I know~

Thank you, sweetheart ...
Your love lifts me in times I need it
and stays with me until comfort enfolds me~

*Sharing my angel's roses of remembrance -
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I love you, Vicky~
I am so glad that God put you on this earth~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com            

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14 posted 2001-10-05 08:13 AM


Beautiful poem Vicky
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15 posted 2001-10-05 09:23 AM


This is a beautiful and sweet poem. I am sure Marge will love it.
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16 posted 2001-10-05 09:46 AM


so beautifully done...love this wonderful gem!!

Charisma

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17 posted 2001-10-05 10:40 AM


Vicky - You gals shore do like romancin', dontcha?  This is a very sweet poem.
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18 posted 2001-10-05 11:36 AM



VickyChicky~  What a kind and beautiful soul you have.  This was such a lovely tribute.  And I agree with Janet, your friendship is a wonderful thing to witness.  

Hugs to both of you  
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

dgvarner
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19 posted 2001-10-08 01:11 PM


oh yeah...this one coloring me late for work....but certainly worth my time!!     

very much enjoyed this one tricks...wonderfully written..if you werent a permanent fixture in my library, i'd have to click this one in..  
====================================
"Each thought...carefully wrapped
In loving remember...
Is tucked away in safest corners
Of the heart

As a gentle breeze touches the cheek
A smile crosses the lips
And peace is found in knowing
It is the kiss of angels"
====================================
very "wow"  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

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20 posted 2001-10-08 03:50 PM


A gentle true. So soft and real.
Tina L.

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21 posted 2001-10-08 03:52 PM


Such a gentle peace it is, just like your work
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22 posted 2001-10-10 04:58 PM


oh..oops..'scuse me..pardon me..bumping this one...  

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

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23 posted 2001-10-10 08:26 PM


Very beautifully done, Vicky! Lovely!
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24 posted 2001-10-14 01:45 PM


Because ... just because~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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25 posted 2001-10-14 03:09 PM




(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful and angelic, sweet friend! (smiles) It's like being kissed by an angel for every blessing you count close to your heart! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, and have a beautiful day! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest vlraynes, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Martie
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26 posted 2001-10-14 05:00 PM


Vicky--Sweet and tender thoughts to a friend, because you are.
Kit McCallum
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27 posted 2001-10-14 05:06 PM


This is so tender and touching Vicky ... I feel as though I've just receive a gentle hug around my heart, very much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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28 posted 2001-10-14 05:52 PM


I don't know how this got by me, but this was just YOU Vicky, in your angel duds again.  I think it is simply wonderful you two have each other, and your heart spilled over in this one, to fill her heart with your love.  Beautiful.

Elizabeth Santos
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29 posted 2001-10-14 07:04 PM


Sweet poetess,
Delicate phrases such as these can only come from a gentle heart. THis is such a pleasure to read, gentle heart.
Liz

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30 posted 2001-10-14 07:16 PM


Very nice, I enjoy reading poetry like this.  It lifts up the heart and inspires the soul.  This poem reflects the beauty of the mind that inspired it.  Wonderful.
Titia Geertman
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31 posted 2001-10-14 08:14 PM


Vicky dear you are so sweet
true friend for Marge indeed

This is just beautiful

glad I caught up with this one.

Titia

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32 posted 2001-10-18 03:09 PM


Vic,
  This is so pretty!  I love it!
      mua,
         Tanya

Mark Bohannan
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33 posted 2001-10-18 06:55 PM


Angels and kisses are definitely worth coming to read about and you have made the journey well worth the read.  Wonderful write my friend.

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