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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-10-04 07:12 PM



Your lips whisper love
in a form of a kiss
Slowly
tasting mine
Kissing my fears away
Taking me out of darkness
Removing all doubt
Convincing my heart that perhaps
you're the one
Avoiding soul searching
accepting my fate
Your kiss takes my spirit
to places unknown
Where we meet
in the gateway of heaven

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-04 07:15 PM


Lovely, lovely...enjoyed!  ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29
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2 posted 2001-10-04 07:26 PM


very lovely indeed! Enjoyed your choice of words.  

warm smiles,
~Marie~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-10-04 07:29 PM


Taking me out of darkness
Removing all doubt
Convincing my heart that perhaps
you're the one
Avoiding soul searching
accepting my fate
Your kiss takes my spirit
to places unknown

Well, I'm for anything that promotes the avoidance of soul searching...now to find someone to kiss.  Good one, walker.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2001-10-04 09:21 PM


This is lovely indeed.

Your kiss takes my spirit
to places unknown
Where we meet
in the gateway of heaven

Beautiful ending

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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5 posted 2001-10-05 05:11 PM


So nice, feels like heaven sometimes, that's for sure.
Sandra

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-10-05 05:13 PM


I have to say you get some nice kisses...James
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7 posted 2001-10-05 05:19 PM


walker, very loving and sweet.   Much enjoyed!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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