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The River
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The River |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
The River The river is calm the stars are shinning bright a beautiful full moon shines upon the water the new beginning of a new night. As I travel down the rivers edge the sounds of nature all around frogs a croaking; singing softly a continous chanting sound. I see before me the moon in its full glow casting a stairway of moon beams to the rippling waters below. The river at night so quiet and serene I often wonder if natures sounds ever go to sleep and dream. As the night comes to an end the sky begins to light all sounds seem to stop their chanting in flight. Gone is the moon the stars shinning bright replaced by the coming of early mornings light. The sun peaking up from the waters edge I know it's here to stay bringing a beautiful new beginning to a brand new day. ~sunshinemist~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The sun peaking up from the waters edge I know it's here to stay bringing a beautiful new beginning to a brand new day. Lovely...lovely. And, with each new day comes renewed hope. Enjoyed, ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nancy, Thank you so much for the read. "new Hope", yes, that is what we all need today. smiles and hugs, ~Marie~  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I found myself wanting to climb that moonbeam stairway. Glad I didn't, since you made it disappear later. But what about those sunbeams? **smiling** A very enjoyable poem. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
MidniteSun, Thank you for enjoying. I found myself lost on that stairway one evening. Very mesmerizing! Oh the sunbeams, dang, left those out. Another poem. "smiling"warm smiles and hugs, ~Marie~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The river at night so quiet and serene I often wonder if natures sounds ever go to sleep and dream. It's like they know what we miss sometimes. I loved the serenity of this poem. Very smooth and tranquil. Thank you for sharing! Sincerely, Regina |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Hi Regina, Thank you for reading. I love the river especially at night. Very peaceful. Warm hugs, ~Marie~ |
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