Open Poetry #16 |
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Branches - Maiya&Willie |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
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Branches Little white pine goaded with envy frail beneath the forest green Winter's weight bends you at the knees Aspen's touch against the bare oak branches Roots of what could have been bring no comfort Burdens of the season tip the scales against renewal Heavier still the limbs sway closer to the lake's silver glazed face Earthen scent cloys the fading of the old Reflections now as the waters ran deeper than wood could ever know Maiya&Willie 2001© [This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 10-04-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maiya~ and WRBreezin~ 'Earthen scent cloys the fading of the old Reflections now as the waters ran deeper than wood could ever know' This is just lovely and rich with imagery~ Wonderfully done~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maiya and willie, your poem has absolutely delightful imagery. I'm looking forward to more. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-04-2001).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Maiya, Willie, this is really great portrayal. Aspen's touch against the bare oak branches Roots of what could have been bring no comfort I could feel the loneliness.... loved it from start to finish. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very good...thank you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent! Thank you for sharing this one! ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Thanks to one and all! We're glad ya liked it! Maiya&Willie |
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