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The Oldest Story of All
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The Oldest Story of All |
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ANGELBABY Junior Member
since 2001-09-01
Posts 25 |
you promised you wouldn't hurt me you promised not to lie you told me your special not another lying guy just wanted someone to love me someone of my own someone to grow with... maybe have a real home been watchin my mama walk on the street not cause she's bad because we had to eat i can't see it my mama gave up everything to make sure of that so i wouldn't be a trick brat i go to school sometimes we don't eat mama washes our clothes we clean and we neat anyone who sees me they never gonna know that tell you what i think lets walk to the door you think you something you think you special? you think your so cool you must be mistaken i ain't no fool boy what you talkin that ain't love you talk much smack boy are .you playing? are you for real? pick up your stuff and hit the road what you mean if i love you??????? oh no boy.. don't give me that act [This message has been edited by ANGELBABY (edited 10-04-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an old story perhaps..but nicely told again.... I enjoyed the read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angelbaby, Interesting, enjoyed the read. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A sad, but very good story. |
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