previously 'dreaming'... i need a new title

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Open Poetry #16

previously 'dreaming'... i need a new title

crazymary
Junior Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 14
nebraska

0 posted 2001-10-04 12:49 PM

You look so peaceful lying there
lost in dreams
without a care
I long to kiss that soft red mouth
and stroke your tousled hair
whisper to your sleeping heart
and ask if I am there
Your skin looks soft and so enticing
just waiting for my touch
I can feel the warmth I long for
my body aches for yours so much
I could wake you gently
and revel in your smile
or lay my head beside yours
and hear you dreaming
for awhile

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-10-04 03:01 AM

I could wake you gently
and revel in your smile
or lay my head beside yours
and hear you dreaming
for awhile

Lovely thoughts here CM

Thanks for sharing them

Maree

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2001-10-09 11:12 AM

I liked this one.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-09 03:23 PM

Like this...very smooth...may I suggest "Sharing Dreams"? James

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