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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-04 12:03 PM

Mutiny

I labor at each breath I take
as memories become the dust,
the concrete thoughts, that settle in
the missing moments,
caught behind such tired eyes.

The tasks before me, burden felt
confined, attempt to slog away,
resistance strikes a heavy blow
as underground rebellion
begins it's rise.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-10-04 12:46 PM

Hmmmm . . .
Very interesting, but leaves me wondering . .

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-10-04 12:47 PM

I've read this five times and most often it seems it is about a process of moving on. Then again, it's late and maybe it's just me. Loved this!

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-10-04 01:03 AM

Ahh, lets keep that willow tree growing strong, for you are strong yourself with lots of support behind you..very gentle smile

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2001-10-04 03:11 AM

nakdthoughts - morning, you're up rather late. Hope that all is well, and getting stronger from what I read in your writing...

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-10-04 06:07 AM

Krawdad...and just  what  may  you be wondering? *s

Duncan...and maybe you are partially right and yes it was late when I wrote it..is not my usual style. Thank you *s

Logan..that poor Willow, just when I think it  has it made, something comes along to pester it. ~smiling back a thanks

BC...yes I was up rather late and up rather early now, sleep evades me at the moment..my mind is stronger, but  my body seems weak. Thank you for the caring words. *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-10-04 08:36 AM

amazing isn't it... how the weight of things haunts our life.... how we always question...

as usual..a very nice write. I do hope you find some peace..and I do hope you find the strength you need to deal with all that is...and what no longer is...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-10-04 11:04 AM

Cpat...I am just circling at the moment...hoping my mind stops its racing. Thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

8 posted 2001-10-04 05:48 PM

we all feel this way and find strength at the most unlikely times. Take care, sweet lady.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-10-05 05:52 AM

Thank you very much Lady S. You are very kind

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-10-10 10:50 PM

Wynter-
   Well, this may not be your 'usual style',
   but I certainly enjoyed it.
   Nicely done, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-10-2001).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-10-22 06:13 PM

thank you Vickie, I don't know how I missed you *s hugs

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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