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Honey? You Ain't Nothing But A Saturday Night
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Honey? You Ain't Nothing But A Saturday Night |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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You aint nothin but a Saturday night Goin out with you sure would seem alright Cuz I got jeans and I got boots And you gots hair that’s wavin its roots But we’s in love with the slow dancing A bottle of bud and we're romancing Cuz that’s what we like to do Maybe even wake up with you I want to be your bestest buddy We can rope our cows till we get all muddy And then dance the night away Honey tell me what you have to say Cuz you sure look good in those roper jeans Makes a guy like me look a little less mean So let’s get out on that disco floor Baby let’s dance til we can dance no more Sweetcakes I slap your butt with cheer Slap me a kiss right here and here Cuz I sure love you (For an hour 'r two) I got a truck that’ll tear up some road I can haul your mother and not lose my load Don’t get all teary I know what I've said You must think some horses ran over my head I wanna marry you in a rodeo wedding Got to get it done before your hips start spreading And the dance floor goes dim Honey you’re a rhinestone gem. Chanel number five and a smoky gray Just for now baby let’s slow dance away… [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-03-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You cowboy you! You should be writin' cowboy love songs, Walt! This is great, I love it! Cor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sounds like a boot scootin boogie!! You are way to cool...wayoutwalt! Enjoyed this...I did so!! ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Nice job, you talked of a horse, truck, mother, and the bottle of bud. That's all it takes to get your honey a moving on that dance floor here in Texas. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
so we all know you're in cowtown! your poem is very energetic with a touch of John Wayne's style of brutt and gallups along like a horsey. well done teksin! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I wanna tip my hat to the Texans and all ya'll others we still love you! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Well, you little cowpoke ... this is wonderful~ Rodoeodo~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yup..seems like country music material to me. I enjoyed this, Walt. Its been a while since I've seen your lighthearted side.  Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I love a man in uniform he can really turn my head, but give me one in tight blue jeans and cowboy boots instead. Yehah! I love this Walt. Dee |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Aha - So this is what you do with all your spare Saturday time... |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
The Title drew me in.. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
So that was you sprawled out on the dance floor! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very well written. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Well, as a newcomer to Dallas, I have recently learned how to twostep, and I am hooked. I have also experienced first hand, there is no gentleman, like a southern gentleman. Great piece Walt. Poetic verse placed in the sadness of my heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yee-haw! Made me wanna put on my two-timing--er, I MEANT two-stepping shoes!!!  Have missed you Walt! So much fun!!! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
You are so lucky to have such a wonderfull lady.Mine ran away with my best friend in my pick up truck.That was bad enough but my bass boat was hitched on the back. paladin |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I can haul your mother and not lose my load Wow! Now that's a man! LOL! You roped me in! Your barn door is open and your spurs are showin'! Sincerely, Regina |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oh wow what a response I miss this kind of adoration |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Walt - I especially like: I wanna marry you in a rodeo wedding Got to get it done before your hips start spreading This is classic Walt - lol. Great poem |
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