night lace - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #16

night lace

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-10-03 07:34 PM

In hidden alcoves
parted with light
and wistful tears
children whisper
of dreamers
as they gather;
The deep harvest moon
brings in the
shadowed voices
and with them
stirs the night
setting moths aflutter
like lace butterflies
dancing around
the world of dreams

A real man

kisses his children goodnight

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-10-03 07:37 PM

this is a wonderful picture. . . well shown. . .

great job. . .

---------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-10-03 07:43 PM

setting moths aflutter
like lace butterflies
dancing around
the world of dreams

This is very very lovely. Well done!
May I add how much I like your signature!
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

3 posted 2001-10-03 09:29 PM

Thanks sven and nancy, I am trying to get back into writing and this forum is always encouraging

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-10-04 03:45 AM

How I have missed your work, sir!

This is just as wonderful and enjoyable as all of your writing has every been to me. You get better and better, and I just want to keep reading.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Rindercella
Member

since 1999-11-12

Posts 64
La La Land

5 posted 2001-10-09 07:17 PM

This is a very nice piece.
Enjoyed.

*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.