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Open Poetry #16

Do You

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2001-10-03 01:41 PM

Do you finally see me
Do I fill your senses
Can you relax now
Has it come to pass
After all this time
Eyes clear, fog lifted
Look, it's me
Older, wiser, but still me
Bruised, Not broken
Am I, me, finally in there
Do you see, me

Connie McDonald

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-10-03 02:54 PM

All one has to do to see..is look with their heart as well as their eyes...

Nicely done...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-10-03 02:57 PM

In your words we do see....nicely done. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

3 posted 2001-10-03 03:11 PM

Cpat and Spirit.... Thank You both very much

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