Open Poetry #16 |
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Calm |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Calm I take your hand kiss your palm in this simple action revolving world goes calm there is nothing more I need to do in a disturbing world stillness of me and you quietly composed as your comfort surrounds all is said in this tranquil sound "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I like it yuh |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very calming. Thanks. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Calm...for me, is difficult... tides incoming from the sea. Wave after wave of overwhelm in theft of grains of calm of beach. I wish I knew the elements so well they'd hearken to my plea and all the torrents I could quell and let the waves sing me to sleep... Smiles Helen...I caught your wave! ![]() |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in the silence, the heart can always be heard. . . great job helen. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very gently spoken....enjoyed. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Very calming indeed, enjoyed. ![]() |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
This is peaceful...so peaceful! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this. Very good. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love and peace stand together. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Such a lovely softly written piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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