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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-09-20 07:42 AM

Walking Rainbows

I’ve walked on rainbows several times
In paintings and in poetry rhymes
But never have I found a vend
That took me to the very end.

I’ve tried and tried in false and true
To paint a portrait true of you
But never have I found in store
That absolute that is your core

Veil on veil I’ve torn away
Yet still another cloak would stay.
Each moment turned to something new.
Beyond a clue in witless view

Your mist enfolds my oversee
Allusions froth with mystery
A golden haze with fires core
That burns and holds my soul in awe.

And so this fired torch remains
And my fantasy still reigns.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2001-09-20 07:43 AM

Perfection!
Liz

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-09-20 08:02 AM

Veil on veil I’ve torn away
Yet still another cloak would stay.
Each moment turned to something new.
Beyond a clue in witless view

Your mist enfolds my oversee
Allusions froth with mystery
A golden haze with fires core
That burns and holds my soul in awe.

And so this fired torch remains
And my fantasy still reigns.
==================================

a little fantasy and flame never hurt a dragon ... keeps him on his tippie toes

What a VERY COOL POEM ...
I do so enjoy when you and Randy write together *L*
Lookie what I found under "Rainbow Dragons"

*winkiewinkie*

me

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

Nan

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Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2001-09-20 08:16 AM

A little mystique is a good thing, Sweet Sy - Nicely said, my dear friend...

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-09-20 08:33 AM

Elizabeth,
Not perfection but better than usual. Love Sy

JM,
You found the butterfly wings, but not of Randys things. Winkiewinkie Stinky

Nan my sweet,
True, but how little is little? *L*

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

5 posted 2001-09-20 11:02 AM

enjoy

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-09-20 11:11 AM

Vandana,
Thank you.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-09-20 11:38 AM

Seymour~

'Your mist enfolds my oversee
Allusions froth with mystery'

Leave it to you to find such creativity~

Love ya'
Marge

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

BSC

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New York, USA

8 posted 2001-09-20 11:54 AM

Ahhhhh ~ just beautiful Seymour.... Bonnie

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-09-20 11:57 AM

I see that your randy dragon still has his golden muse - I love this! Well written Sir Sy!~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

nakdthoughts
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Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-09-20 12:30 PM

Your mist enfolds my oversee
Allusions froth with mystery
A golden haze with fires core
That burns and holds my soul in awe.

And so this fired torch remains
And my fantasy still reigns.

some of my favorite words used here...inspired I was to write of the rainbows and myst reigning upon me and my moody blues today...inspired by your title first..and then after posting reading these heartfelt words...

as always, a wonderful poem, Sy

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2001-09-20 12:35 PM

Marge,
And leave it to you to always throw a kiss and hug. *L*

Thank you Bonnie.

Melissa,
New gold or old gold have the same value. *L*

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2001-09-20 12:37 PM

Wynter,
And as always you are a love.

Martie

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California

13 posted 2001-09-20 01:23 PM

Sy--A beautiful poem, dear man!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

14 posted 2001-09-20 03:07 PM

Enjoyed! From the perfect title to the end...exquisite!

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2001-09-20 03:44 PM

Martie,
Thank you my dear.

Enchantress,
Thank you for the charming comment.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

16 posted 2001-09-21 06:41 AM

Wow! You are just getting better and better. Seasoned with multi-colored sprinkles of glittering wisdom.

Sincerely,
Regina

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

17 posted 2001-09-21 07:14 AM

Your fantasies ARE my pots of gold...

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

18 posted 2001-10-05 11:42 AM

ohhhhh how beautiful.......I keep this one if you don't mind

Charisma

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

19 posted 2001-10-05 11:52 AM

Sy~ Awww...this is beautiful!

A little mystery is a good thing I think

What a magical write.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

20 posted 2001-10-05 11:52 AM

oops...excuse me, I forgot to file this away to my library

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

21 posted 2001-10-05 12:29 PM

Thank you sweet kitten.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

22 posted 2001-10-05 12:49 PM

Sy, you have a true romantic's heart. I love the read your compositions because they alwys surprise me with the unique twists and paths.

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2001-10-05 05:51 PM

LngJhnAg,
That comes from a devious mind. LOL

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