Open Poetry #16 |
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I did it Mom, she said |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands ![]() |
She was dancing on the field tears flowing from her eyes when she hugged her team Then she came to me a big smile on her face I did it Mom she said I did it did you see And I saw this girl a year ago coming back from Prague her knee smashed badly she got special treatment they weren't sure the doctors It took her seven months before she started again to play softball the only thing she lives for I said Yes, I saw you I saw you play your game and win the National League she is a real champion my girl A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so proud a write, and justly so... ~Smiling for the champ ~Wynter |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
this is so special.the best feeling in the world is making your mom proud.... ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Congratulations!! Way to go, girl. A winner all the way. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How proud you must be...and what an inspiration for others who have been injured. Good write, ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a proud Mom you are, and rightly so. Congratulations to your daughter If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Titia~ What an uplifting, joyous write~ Give Lynn a *HUG* from me~ Way to go *SPARKS* ! ! ![]() Sparks Dutch champion! OOSTERHOUT (Neth.) - Sparks became Dutch champion on Saturday, winning 7-4 vs. Twins to complete a four-game sweep and win the best-of-seven Holland Series. This is wonderfully written with motherly pride and love~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia- This is wonderful! It put a great big smile on my face! ![]() And...it brought back memories of my days on a fast-pitch softball league. It was soooo much fun! ![]() Thanks for sharing this special moment with us. Hugs, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds to me like the apple doesn't fall far from the tree....she has her mother's traits ![]() ![]() |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Congratulations to your daughter on the win and to you both for having such a great relationship. And of course, to you, for the poem! |
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